superexex Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 This is an card that I made. I know the pic isn't very good, I made it on BannedStory. Please comment OCG errors. Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Hehe, nice. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superexex Posted June 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Any OCG errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 I don't think so. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superexex Posted June 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Ok Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 nice effect, but dropping the atk to 0 seems OPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ebikiyo Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 I would think that it should say "You can only activate this card when..." so on and so forth. If you want to get good at effects, I recommend reading varied real card effects and trying to emulate the same wording. The card? Odd effect, but could be extremely useful when the time comes. And the picture is decent, don't worry. 8.5 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superexex Posted June 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Ok I changed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dismal Euphony Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 I agree with Ragnarok, I think reducing the ATK to 0 is a little much... Maybe reduce it by "x" amount? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superexex Posted June 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 How? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 No just drop the whole decrease part ^^ that makes it more balanced. I love the pic and the effect but like ragnarok said the decrease part is OP. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 You might want to change the decreased part to say. "decrease the attack points of the attacking monster to 0 for the rest of your opponent's Battle Phase." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superexex Posted June 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Maybe: "Your opponent doesn't take any Battle Damage from this attack"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 for future reference:decrease = Decrease good card.maybe a little simple but its playable. 9/10 same problem as every1 else so far. 0 ATK is a lil op'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superexex Posted June 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Changed. Please comment new OCG errors from the thing I added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Cool card. Like everyone else said ATK to 0 is OP'd. Good job though. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superexex Posted June 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 OK how? Decrease the ATK by 1000? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 I say just remove that part altogether. Just a suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superexex Posted June 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 I don't understand what your saying, but anyway I changed it, an I'm NOT gonna make any more changes (except if it's a good suggestion:D) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 the card is well done. seems like i could use it in my deck lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Good card.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superexex Posted June 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Thanks everyone for rating and commenting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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