Silent Omega Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Well, the preview sounds good, and I hope my character will appear soon... Also, McDonalds is evil, that's why your town does not have it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Docomodake Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Why would a town with a population of 500 have a Starbucks? The town I'm in now has 1000 people and doesn't even have a McDonald's. There would be no point in the plot >.> Frankly, I don't even see a plot.It's whiny teenagers who drink coffee and then drink more coffee and then relationship problems and then cream on your tits and then ohay coffee. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Why would a town with a population of 500 have a Starbucks? The town I'm in now has 1000 people and doesn't even have a McDonald's. There would be no point in the plot >.> Frankly' date=' I don't even see a plot.It's whiny teenagers who drink coffee and then drink more coffee and then relationship problems and then cream on your tits and then ohay coffee.[/quote'] So basicalyy your saying this isn't your type of fan fic >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted July 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 I'm only going to say this once. If you don't have any constructive criticizm and just bashing and bad mouthing, kindly shut your mouth and GTFO. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs. SHINee <3 Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 When will the next chapter be here i am still waiting -_- STILL WAITING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Well' date=' the preview sounds good, and I hope my character will appear soon... Also, McDonalds is evil, that's why your town does not have it.[/quote'] oh please. It's not that evil. You should give things a chance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 No, I like the food, but Ronald scares me... >. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 yeah, only to us older people. It's such a shame the children get corrupted by him though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Docomodake Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 I'm only going to say this once. If you don't have any constructive criticizm and just bashing and bad mouthing' date=' kindly shut your mouth and GTFO. ^_^[/quote'] I suppose you enjoy Twilight and High School Musical too, eh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted July 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 I'm only going to say this once. If you don't have any constructive criticizm and just bashing and bad mouthing' date=' kindly shut your mouth and GTFO. ^_^[/quote'] I suppose you enjoy Twilight and High School Musical too, eh?HSM Yes (On;y cuzz I'm performing in it) Twilight, hell no, but I have pals that do. Look if u really wanna talk beef with me take it to PM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Midnight Thief just ignore Docomodake or something. Now, the next chapter coming anytime soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted July 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Hm? Oh yeah the chapter. Yep I'm about a few paragraphs away from finishing. Tomorrow I have a busy schedule tho (Theatre, HP6, other stuff) I will try to have it done by tomorrow night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 that's ok. I simply hoped for it to be up before the week is out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Hm? Oh yeah the chapter. Yep I'm about a few paragraphs away from finishing. Tomorrow I have a busy schedule tho (Theatre' date=' HP6, other stuff) I will try to have it done by tomorrow night.[/quote'] Thats good ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 I only hope it's not up TOO late tonight so I can still review before sleeping Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Alwright! Chapter three is now up! A bit of humor in this one, but mainly for character introductory. Sorry Soul, I did promise that your character would be in this chapter. Unfortunatly, I still had one major character to introduce. Don't worry He'll be up next chapter. If you want to know how, just PM me k? Enjoy the chapter everyone! ~MT~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 shorter than expected. 27 min late to take off merely 27 cents off the paycheck? That seems a little too small to me. Should have taken off 27 times the number earned on the paycheck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Oops! I ment to type seconds. Ok I fixed it. What do you mean shorter? Shorter as in Chapter or update time? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 shorter as in chapter, at least compared to your Knights fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Really? I did word check. It was about the same length. I just didn't center this one out so it just seemed shorter. I'll give you a longer chapter next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 it doesn't really matter to me. Shorter chapters will do just fine it you can't make it longer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Great Chapter 3! Man, Haley's boss is such a wuzz...:? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 I'm somewhat annoyed because Edward [insert long last name here] is such a pussy, AND he has a picture of Hibari D:< But whatever, it was a nice chapter, and I'm wondering when my character will appear... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs. SHINee <3 Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 That man was annoying (Forgot his name but its Haileys boss) i want to throw him off of a bridge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Thats ok ~MT~, it was still a great chapter ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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