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p><p>[spoiler=effect]If you or your opponent activates a Spell Card, put 1 Spell Counter on this card (max 5) .Increase this card

 

 

 

[spoiler=effect]Activate during a turn when a monster you control was destroyed. Discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard. Battle damage to you becomes 0. Increase your Life Points by the combined ATK and DEF of the destroyed monster. During your next Standby Phase, Special Summon the destroyed monster from your Graveyard to your side of the field in Defence Position and its Battle Position cannot be switched.

 

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Very good cards in general. Some slight mistakes and things I would change...

 

 

Fallen Angel Savana - Change "unto" into "from"

 

 

Dark Counselor Malice - Remove the tid-bit "in the same battle phase". It's obvious that the monster will attack twice during that phase, because it's the only phase it CAN attack in.

 

 

Flame Angel Meleena - I would change the last bit of the effect to...

 

"During each of your Standby phases (or "during your Standby phase"), inflict damage to your opponent equal to 300 x the number of removed Spell Counters.

 

 

An Angel's Blessing - A little bit OP in my opinion, though everything else is fine.

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OCG fix:

 

First card:

 

unto = from

 

Second card:

 

"When this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a DARK monster..."

 

Third card:

 

Increase this card's Atk by 300 for every Spell Counter on this card = Increase this card's Atk for every Spell Counter on this card x300.

 

*Same with the last sentence*

 

Fourth card:

 

your side of the field = your field

 

Good cards here, I like the images though the first has a border around it, the OCG is alright, and effects are balanced.

 

The Trap Card seems a bit overpowered to me, but I would probably use it.

 

8/10

 

EDIT: ^Beat me to it ;)^

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