Organization XIII Cards: Update - "Nobody" Monsters added

[snyperfox2003]

1. I already know that the Organization XIII member pics are overused so dont mention it.

2. I just learned how to utlize the drop boxes (a.k.a. "spoiler") so this post should look like it has space lol.

3. update added: nobody tuners and synchro monsters

 

[spoiler=Organization XIII]

 

 

[spoiler=Nobodies]

 

 

 

[spoiler=Card Lore]

Organization XIII - Xemnas: While this card is face-up on the Field all "Sorcerer Nobody" lose 1 Star Level and 700 ATK. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each "Organization XIII" monster with a different name in your Graveyard. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

 

Organization XIII - Axel: When this card is sent to the Graveyard, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the effect of a "Ruined Kingdom Hearts" card, you can send 2 "Organization XIII - Axel" from your hand / Deck to the Graveyard to destroy all monsters your opponent controls.

 

Organization XIII - Demyx: While this card is face up on the field "Dancer Nobodies" cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon 2 "Water Copy" tokens (Fiend-Type/Water/Level 4/ATK:600/DEF:650) in face up Defense Position on your side of the Field.

 

Organization XIII - Luxord: While this card is face up on the field all "Gambler Nobody" are not affected by Spells. Once per turn you can roll a six-sided die, If the result is 1 or 2, destroy all monsters on your opponent’s side of the field. If the result is 3, 4, or 5, destroy 1 monster on your opponent’s side of the field. If the result is 6, destroy all monsters on your side of the field.

 

Organization XIII - Marluxia: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

As long as this card is face up on the Field, all plant-type monsters gain 500 ATK.

 

Organization XIII - Roxas: While this card is face up on the field all "Samurai Nobody" gain 1 Star Level. If you control a face-up Tuner monster, you can Special summon this card from the Graveyard. If this card was Summoned this way, remove it from play when it is removed from the Field.

 

Dragoon Nobody:1 "Nobody" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card attacks a monster, you can place 1 Nobody Counter on that monster at the end of the Damage Step (max. 1). You can remove all Nobody Counters from your opponent's monsters to reduce the ATK and DEF of each monster that had a Nobody Counter to 0, until the End Phase.

 

Berserker Nobody: 1 "Nobody" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

Once per turn, you can change the battle position of 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. During battle between the attacking card and a Defense position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card inflict the difference in Battle Damage to your opponent.

 

Gambler Nobody: 1 "Nobody" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card is Summoned your opponent rolls a die. If the result is 1 or 2, Draw cards from your Deck equal to the number on the die. If the result is 3 or 4, your Opponet draws 1 card from their Deck. If the result is 5 or 6, Special Summon 1 Monster from your Graveyard with a level equal or less than the number on the die

 

 

 

 

Credit for Organization XIII member images still goes to Toru Uchiha on photobucket. Credit for Nobody images goes to OZKai on Flickr.

[Larxene]

I'm gonna have to hurt someone if I see another Larxene card without an effect.

 

And the ones that do have effects are just so plain... >>;;

 

The pics are even more generic, and probably the most overused pics used for any Organization XIII cards.

[snyperfox2003]

I'm gonna have to hurt someone if I see another Larxene card without an effect.

 

And the ones that do have effects are just so plain... >>;;

 

The pics are even more generic' date=' and probably the most overused pics used for any Organization XIII cards.

[/quote']

 

well for starters i havent seen a thread with these organization XIII pics used and if you showed me them i will admit to overused pics but untill then, get over it.

 

as for the larxene card w/o effect, most of the cards i made were based info on wikipedia. it didnt give enough info for me to make a proper effect for her

[BabaXIII]

I like it. I like it a LOT. But yeah three vanilla is too much for my taste. 7/10

[Larxene]

I'm gonna have to hurt someone if I see another Larxene card without an effect.

 

And the ones that do have effects are just so plain... >>;;

 

The pics are even more generic' date=' and probably the most overused pics used for any Organization XIII cards.

[/quote']

 

well for starters i havent seen a thread with these organization XIII pics used and if you showed me them i will admit to overused pics but untill then, get over it.

 

as for the larxene card w/o effect, most of the cards i made were based info on wikipedia. it didnt give enough info for me to make a proper effect for her

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-56642.html

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-23898.html

 

And not being able to come up with an effect just shows how uncreative you are.

[Phantom Roxas]

Why is every member except for Larxene and Roxas Fiend-Type?

[Super Half Vamp Riku]

awsome man larxene should be a normal

[Larxene]

awsome man larxene should be a normal

 

You just lost your genital privileges for that statement.

[Infinitus]

awsome man larxene should be a normal

 

None of them should be normals.

 

This is Org XIII we are talking about. I see a couple OCG problems,

none of them should be normals, however. A couple of them need longer effects. Marluxia, all the monsters need more creative effects except Axel, Luxord, and Xaldin.

 

7.5/10

[snyperfox2003]

I'm gonna have to hurt someone if I see another Larxene card without an effect.

 

And the ones that do have effects are just so plain... >>;;

 

The pics are even more generic' date=' and probably the most overused pics used for any Organization XIII cards.

[/quote']

 

well for starters i havent seen a thread with these organization XIII pics used and if you showed me them i will admit to overused pics but untill then, get over it.

 

as for the larxene card w/o effect, most of the cards i made were based info on wikipedia. it didnt give enough info for me to make a proper effect for her

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-56642.html

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-23898.html

 

And not being able to come up with an effect just shows how uncreative you are.

 

ok see ill cope to the overused card pic but then again i havent seen them used in pop culture but i digress.

 

as for not comming up with an effect thats just something i wanted to do. i want to give it an effect but one that is valid to the character's nature.

 

insted of bashing my cards offer help and insight for my cards. as for awesome66's comment i thank him and i plan on editing all of the cards soon when i find time and be sure to add more creative effects and wish him to pm me for any help he can offer

[Infinitus]

You are quite welcome. It's my pleasure to help new members with their cards. Use real cards for correct Card Grammar.

:D:D:D:D

 

The kindness and positivity, does it burn Larxene?

[Phantom Roxas]

Larxene and Roxas should be LIGHT.

 

Why is every member except for Larxene and Roxas Fiend-Type?

[Amethyst Phoenix]

The correct name of the keyblade pictured in "Nothingness Keyblade" is Two Across >_>

[snyperfox2003]

You are quite welcome. It's my pleasure to help new members with their cards. Use real cards for correct Card Grammar.

:D:D:D:D

 

The kindness and positivity' date=' does it burn Larxene?

[/quote']

 

i do use correct card grammer in fact some of them have actual card effects lol but im going to be editing them today so expect them by 2morrow ^-^

 

as to Larxene, i just remembered that on this site most of the cards made have overused pics so there is no real issue with my cards

[Infinitus]

You are quite welcome. It's my pleasure to help new members with their cards. Use real cards for correct Card Grammar.

:D:D:D:D

 

The kindness and positivity' date=' does it burn Larxene?

[/quote']

 

i do use correct card grammer in fact some of them have actual card effects lol but im going to be editing them today so expect them by 2morrow ^-^

 

as to Larxene, i just remembered that on this site most of the cards made have overused pics so there is no real issue with my cards

 

Yes. There are OCG problems. Cards having text, which includes the backround, if you haven't noticed, also counts as a problem.

 

You need to capatalize Spell Cards, and Xigbar is overpowered. An effect like that should go to a much higher level monster, considering how weak his stats are. He should have to be Special Summoned in a certain way. You could just Normal Summon him and with enough cards in your hand, almost nuke your opponent's field.

 

From Demyx all the way to Roxas, you spelled Organization wrong.

 

NONE of them should be normals. Never use Normals. Not only that, wether it depend on their personality or not, you could still give a couple them more complex effects. You could make one a synchro, and use other Nobodies to make it, etc. etc.

 

There is real issues with your cards, and even if there wasn't, there is always room for improvement.

[Dark Lightning]

Roxas deserves an effect

[snyperfox2003]

If you havent seen yet there are new updates

[smash bros 123]

nice cards and they look good to me 8/10

[Lost Soul]

cool 8/10, i like em keep it up

[Super Half Vamp Riku]

yay new cards