Jarl Ballin Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 TA DA!.....(cricket sounds) This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effects of "Allignment of the Planets". Increase the ATK of this card by 200 for each monster card in the Graveyard with "Cosmos" in their name. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can remove from play 2 monsters with "Cosmos" in their name from the graveyard to destroy one card on the field (this effect cannot be negated). This is my attempt at a realistic card. Besides the picture, I think it's pretty good. Please comment and critisize and encourage more :D *Update Here's the other cards that would go with this card. A loyal knight born from the Cosmos. He is as strong as he is compassionate. Each time a monster with "Cosmos" in it's name is destroyed as a result of battle, put 1 Spell Counter on this card (max 3). Remove any number of Spell Counters to act as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon x1 per Spell Counter. Remove all 3 Spell Counters and pay 1000 Life Points to special summon 1 "Shinra - Knight of the Cosmos" from your hand or deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 Please post the Effect.I cant read it nor will I attempt to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 1. Something has gone horribly wrong with your card text. 2. We need to see "Alignment of the Planets" + "Cosmos" cards. 3. Main Phase and Graveyard should be capitalized. Can't give a fair rating at the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jarl Ballin Posted August 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 The text, is beyond my control (I think). I'll fix all of that and post the effect. I'll also make the other card's aswell *UpdateOk, it's all finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 it looks quite good for the boosting effect, so 2000 atk suits it fine The 2 monsters removed from play to destroy 1 card on the field seems a bit too costly, might want to drop it to 1 monster removed from play 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 good ideas, nice picsi would suggest making Alignment a continous spell or how would you put Spell Counters on it?or a field card? otherwise, decent idea 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 good ideas' date=' nice picsi would suggest making Alignment a continous spell or how would you put Spell Counters on it?or a field card? otherwise, decent idea 8/10[/quote'] Great spotting for a newbie ^^ I hope you don't mind but I "permenanetly borrowed" the picture of Cosmos Warrior (couldn't resist) 8.4 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 WTF? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 I like it, excpesially the Vannilla. HA!!! But I would make Allignment a countious. other then that a 8/10. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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