My first card

[Rhollu]

i am a Japanese,so my grammar is not that good

heres the first card i made

[War Kittens]

Wow! This is really well done. I can only really think of one thing and that is capitalizing Special Summon. Other than that, I'd say it's pretty good, if maybe a little bit OP'd. 9.8/10

[-Berserker-]

This card cannot be Special Summoned. Select 1 card your opponent controls and destroy it. This effect can only be activated once per turn, during your Main Phase.

Something like that...

Probably the ATK and DEF are very low for its level. The effect is not powerful enough to require such a downside.

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

very good card.

you grammar isnt too bad. it should look something like this

"This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn, destroy 1 card your opponent controls."

picture is nice

8/10

[Kotaro]

Use the OCG that everyone else has said. The only grammar error is that you spelt destroy wrong.

 

I think its balanced, but maybe lower its level a bit.

 

7/10

[ragnarok1945]

for 2200 atk, lv6 is enough, not lv9

 

the effect looks quite balanced though

 

7.5/10

[Big Lez]

No..while seeing the effect the level could be 8 (9 is too high for the quite simple effect)

 

Balanced, Good Graphic, Pic Fits

Very well done! Not very good OCG, but very good for a newb

[spoiler=OCG-Fix]This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, select 1 card your opponent controls and destroy it.

 

8.5/10

 

You might wanna join the Newb Defense League

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-137084.html

[Neo-MasterX]

9.9/10