Nickoboy1 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 this is barely more than a monster version of Swords of Revealing Light, hardly creative in terms of effect, the OCG is off anyway 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 OCG fix: Select 1 monster your opponent controls, that monster cannot attack or change position for 3 turns. I'm not very sure but I guess that's better. Effect is some what simple, try to add a little flavour to it, the picture needs cropping. Not bad. 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber-Valley™ Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Wow, It Can't attack for 3 Whole Turns!Get rid of the whole. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 boring effect, picture is bland, ocg is off.its a sub-par version of swords.give it something else, something that would give it a unique edge.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 OCG is very off opponenet's=Opponent's and Whole why whole.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 OCG is way off, so I'll fix it for you, nobody has coorectly fixed it yet:When this card is Normal Summoned, select 1 monster your opponent controls. The selected monster cannot attack or change it's Battle Position until your third Standby Phase after this card's activation. I had to change the effect slightly because you didn't state in the effect you originally put on your card when the effect would be activated. Anyway the card is bad, pad pic and bad effect so I will give a 3.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 This isnt worth my life 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 dude nice effort but try making it a flip effect 6.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stunnero101 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 7/10you could have been more creative with the effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 OCG is way off, pic is bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethaniel Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 No. Not it's not. Check your OCG. 4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 The pic is a cat for starters it doesn't look like a rat at all, not creative at all, and the ocg is bad. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nick2496~ Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 crappy u.u3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Incognito:. Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 This isnt worth my time. 2/10 That and stop lying!That card is not SO COOLZ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nickoboy1 Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 is my laughing skull good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 this one's pic is ok OCG is way off though. Why did you say this card is summoned? You can't summon a spell card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nickoboy1 Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 wot's the rating?it has to be at least 6/10? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 combined with the OPed effect I wouldn't give it any higher than 3.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nickoboy1 Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 i changed it happy now!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zombiepromking Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 looks more like a cat. 5/10 - OCG needs work, pic could be better; effect could afford some flavor simple effects aren't bad they just should be useful simple effects this is not so much of one of those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nickoboy1 Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 MY EVIL GRIN CARD IS QUITE GOOD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 that's almost TOO powerful if your opponent doesn't have a WATER deck 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 All these cards have terrible OCG. You may want to visit the link in my sig/or PM Max Darkness and consult with him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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