Libbeth Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 I'm currently writing a fan fiction (it hasn't been published yet, so please dont ask for a link). My main character has these two cards in her deck. Tell me what you think please <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 the pictures are good.the ocg is off however.mother summon is way way way too op'ed.... 3 free dragons? with only a slight cost.otherwise, not a bad effort.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 "any nearby player's deck..." made me laugh :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Pics are great I can't read lady of dragons effect put it in lore OCG could be better 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 hey you!!yeah you, on the table next to me.i need to summon your dragons.thank you.you would normally have to change that because you cant use nearby players deck. just your own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stunnero101 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 7/10kinda kool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 1st pic looks like a snake's face in the background, not a dragon Mother's Summon is too powerful without a drawback though 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 OCG is very weak, and the pics need improvement. You'll get better. This is a decent start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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