nick2496~ Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Hi everybody I am posting my new card so you can all rate it and comment Regular advanced holo Please comment tell me which one you prefer and tell me how can I fix my errors.bump...I can bump now right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Some ocg errors you just need to capitalize some stuff like Normal and Special Summon, Set, and Hand. Pic isn't that good but it's not bad either. Effect is ok but how are you supposed to Special Summon it? Just send it to the grave and monster reborn it? 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nick2496~ Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 You can summon it with a card effect trap or spell card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.King Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Pretty balanced card, but the OCG is off a bit. The Advanced Holo is OK, and the pic is meh. But you're new like I am. Good card, 7/10. Can't wait for that Set! XP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 the pic is bad, but better with the holo some ocg, and you need to capitilze some stufff likeNormal Summoned or Set, some others as well 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Dark Dragon King of the Abyss This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. If this card attack or is attacked, place 1 Dragon Counter on this card. By removing 6 Dragon Counters from this card, Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower monster from your hand. Too slow, and a bit UP. You should add a Special Summon effect to it and make it more fast because 6 Dragon Counters is really slow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stunnero101 Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 ocg errors...7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 yeah, effect is too slow. Try using Spell Counters and their way of filling themselves ;) its alot faster, and try to reduce it to only 3 (just a suggestion)I like that pic, don't care what other people say, its awesome :)OCG corrected already in above comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 the regular looks better, though 6 counters will take too long, I'd drop it to 3 or 4 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nick2496~ Posted August 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 TNKS for your suggestions guyz I needed them. The pic is awesome for me too but people like what they like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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