Ryanm50 Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 How about this monster? :lol:Good isn't it. How about this equip? :lol:Give me your comments on what you think about them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
740kt Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Err... Realistic Fusion monsters don't have descriptions, and it has too much ATK and DEF, making overpowered. The second card, however, is actually good. If you would like an OCG fix, just PM me. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Well for the first card... Overpowered...WAY overpowered Get rid of the discription and then it might work... mabey... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 1st card is just Dark Paladin and OPed anyway 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dimitri Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 first pic is dark paladin, OPed, ......., 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mas-103 Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 what thy said :) :) :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 No its not good 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 I agree with Ragnarok however I take extra points off for using a real cards picture. sorry. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biadcy Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 so bad 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mintcookie Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Used/Blurry PictureDescription for a Fusing Monster -14/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 0/10 Too OP'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Pretty much all of the above. I can tell you didn't put any effort into this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Card A: Has no effect, is a divine (which aren't allowed in realistics because they are not allowed to be played) Overpowered, the pic is blurry and used in another card, and the flavor text is horrible. 0/10 Card B: Well, no I understand why you made it a normal. The OCG is pretty off, and could make it even more overpowered. I'm afraid this card gains the same rating. TipsTips Card A: It needs ALOT of changing. Change the attribute to dark, get rid of the Dark Magician knight part in the fusion, and use photobucket for an image that hasn't been used in a real card. Click on the image, then scroll down. Put your cursor in the link in the box to the left, and copy it into the image URL in the card maker. Give it an effect, then lower it's attack to at least 4000, and change it's defence down to 0. Card B: I would get rid of the effect, and use the photobuckeet image thing. Then change the effect to something that covers it's weakness, at some sort of price or setback. I hope I helped, and I'm not trying to be harsh, so I don't want you to take it that way.If you need more help, PM me and I'll tell someone you can PM for help. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryanm50 Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Thanks for the tips, awsome66. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 no good reject..its just a dark paladin with alternate art~!! the second pic has a warner brothers logo there~~! 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 the pic is of dark palladin and dark magician OPed 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryanm50 Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Is this better? How about the equip is well? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ǚĺƫĩɱąƫë Ðûëĺĩșƫ Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 its a little better but i thik thats still a card pic 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 sorcerer of dark magic in the movies.....5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 LOL -10/10OP'ed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 what the??? hehehheheh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryanm50 Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 I've never heard of "Sorcerer Of Dark Magic". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stunnero101 Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 a lil better than the first but blurry..4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 That is still a card pic. Also, defense isn't exactly the most important thing. I also asked to give the first card an effect, then use the equip to fix the effect's weakness. Also, the pics are still blurry. Did you get the pic from photobucket? Also, DON'T SAVE THEM TO YOUR COMPUTER. Click on the pic, then copy the link, not the one with the image code, the one that says direct link. Or, youc could take a look at the image archives in the Showcase section, right click on the pic, click properties, and copy and paste the link into the image URL in the card maker. But, if you do that, REMEMBER TO GIVE CREDIT TO THE USER THAT OWNS THE ARCHIVE. THAT IS VERY IMPORTANT. DON'T FORGET IT. Try doing things that way, and I'm sure it could be better. Keep trying. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.King Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 The first one, has a description, which no Fusion Monsters currently have, and is WAY to OPed. The second one has some OCG errors. For both of them, I'll give you a 4.5/10, because you're new. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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