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[align=center]This is my First (and hopefully not last) Set which is SELF-DRAWN. (^_^)

The theme of the deck is using Monster Levels as a key component in the duel. Devastate your opponent by extremely increasing the Levels of their monsters and use it to your advantage.

 

RATE and COMMENT PLS. (Negative comments accepted but don't blame me if I rate your cards that way too.)

 

 

Due to the comments I received, I have completely changed all effects of all cards. Hope this is better.

Rate and Comment away! XD

 

 

New Card!!!

 

 

[spoiler=WAW-014 Aquatic Alloy Serpent - Slitherwing]287830k.jpg

 

 

 

 

Low-Level Monsters

 

[spoiler=WAW-001 Aquatic Alloy Creature - Turtail]287830.jpg

 

 

[spoiler=WAW-002 Aquatic Alloy Creature - Octocle]287830q.jpg

 

 

[spoiler=WAW-011 Aquatic Alloy Creature - Sharpang]287830x.jpg

 

 

 

 

Mid-Level Monsters

 

[spoiler=WAW-003 Aquatic Alloy Claw - Lobstorm]287830r.jpg

 

 

[spoiler=WAW-005 Aquatic Alloy Shield - Splicent]287830t.jpg

 

 

[spoiler=WAW-006 Aquatic Alloy Axe - Gella]287830v.jpg

 

 

[spoiler=WAW-007 Aquatic Alloy Blade - Knightsea]287830o.jpg

 

 

 

 

Support Cards

 

[spoiler=WAW-004 Alloy Impaling]287830.jpg

 

 

[spoiler=WAW-008 Aquatic Rebirth Core]287830b.jpg

 

 

 

 

High-Level Monsters

 

[spoiler=WAW-009 Aquatic Alloy King - Harileo]287830h.jpg

 

Effect:

When your opponent Summons a monster, increase its Level by 1. You can Special Summon this card if your opponent controls a monster whose Level is equal to or more than this card. If this card is Special Summoned this way, destroy all face-up cards on your opponent's side of the field.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=WAW-010 Aquatic Alloy Queen - Reinagord]287830e.jpg

 

Effect:

When your opponent Summons a monster, increase its Level by 1. You can Special Summon this card if your opponent controls a monster whose Level is equal to or more than this card. If this card was Special Summoned this way, destroy all face-down cards on your opponent's side of the field.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Key Card

 

[spoiler=WAW-012 Ocean Steel Dragon]

287830r.jpg

 

Effect:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 "Aquatic Alloy" monsters with different names from your Graveyard. You can discard 1 Water monster from your hand to destroy cards on the field equal to the discarded monster's Level. If this card would be destroyed, you can offer 1 Water monster on your side of the field instead. Control of this card cannot switch.

 

 

 

 

 

Special Card

 

Credits to "Άř¢ħėłäűŝ" for Holo. (^_^)

 

[spoiler=WAW-000 Aquatic Alloy Maiden - Lunasteel]

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Effect:

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner WATER monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned, place 6 Steel Counters on this card. Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for each Steel Counter on this card. During either player's turn, you can remove 1 Steel Counter from this card to destroy 1 face-up card on the field. Control of this card cannot switch.

 

And yup, that is her sword on WAW-004 "Alloy Impaling" (^_^)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hope you like it. Enjoy.[/align]

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"Aquatic Alloy" monsters are interesting. They both share an interesting effect, seemingly designed to eff up an opponent's synchro attempts. However, an opponent seeing this coming could use this to great advantage. Their unique effects, different from one another, are also nice.

 

Good notes:

1: Fine effects. Nowhere near broken, but also keenly useful to a player using mindgames.

2: Archetype comprehension.

3: Game grammar is well-kept and accurate.

 

Bad notes:

1: artwork could use touching up. More than anything, a more detailed background, but not more detailed than the monsters themselves.

2: Limitations of deck devotion. I could see an "Aquatic Alloy" shark, perhaps a vicious Synchro Monster.

 

Your overall rating is:

8.9/10

 

-Jazin Kay, GECM Captain.

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"Aquatic Alloy" monsters are interesting. They both share an interesting effect' date=' seemingly designed to eff up an opponent's synchro attempts. However, an opponent seeing this coming could use this to great advantage. Their unique effects, different from one another, are also nice.

 

Good notes:

1: Fine effects. Nowhere near broken, but also keenly useful to a player using mindgames.

2: Archetype comprehension.

3: Game grammar is well-kept and accurate.

 

Bad notes:

1: artwork could use touching up. More than anything, a more detailed background, but not more detailed than the monsters themselves.

2: Limitations of deck devotion. I could see an "Aquatic Alloy" shark, perhaps a vicious Synchro Monster.

 

Your overall rating is:

8.9/10

 

-Jazin Kay, GECM Captain.

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Thanks. I really appreciate it. Don't worry. I'm adding more cards. (As soon as I'm done with their tedious art) :D

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I really like your pictures, I (and a lot of other people) can't draw like that and I don't think you should say the art is bad because it's pretty good. Some of the best Self-Drawn I have seen. I like how these cards (at least right now) focusus on knowing what the opponent might do and how they irritate synchro users.

 

8/10 Would like to see more of this set

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I really like your pictures' date=' I (and a lot of other people) can't draw like that and I don't think you should say the art is bad because it's pretty good. Some of the best Self-Drawn I have seen. I like how these cards (at least right now) focusus on knowing what the opponent might do and how they irritate synchro users.

 

8/10 Would like to see more of this set

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Thanks. I just don't like people flaming the hard work I put on them.

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Cool the picture are great. I agree with Crimson General that you hold quite potential. As an (amateur) artist I encourage you to add some shading(even though the glowing made up for it.)

 

I like the idea of this Archetype. I personally like water monster but there are not so much interesting water Archetype nowaday.

 

OCG is fine, balanced/unique and might be useful effect 9/10

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The picture of this one is nice again but they start to look to much a like because your color scheme on them is very alike and the backgrounds are very simple and pretty much the same. So I would (if I could draw) change the backgrounds a bit, add a few little details or something. As for your monster, I like it a lot but I suggest to make it a bit higher level with more ATK and DEF because level 4 is a very generic level so you won't even need the effects of your other monsters to special summon this one. Anyway, why those this one have Claw where the others have creature, is there some hidden meaning behind that?

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The picture of this one is nice again but they start to look to much a like because your color scheme on them is very alike and the backgrounds are very simple and pretty much the same. So I would (if I could draw) change the backgrounds a bit' date=' add a few little details or something. As for your monster, I like it a lot but I suggest to make it a bit higher level with more ATK and DEF because level 4 is a very generic level so you won't even need the effects of your other monsters to special summon this one. Anyway, why those this one have Claw where the others have creature, is there some hidden meaning behind that?

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This ^^

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The picture of this one is nice again but they start to look to much a like because your color scheme on them is very alike and the backgrounds are very simple and pretty much the same. So I would (if I could draw) change the backgrounds a bit' date=' add a few little details or something. As for your monster, I like it a lot but I suggest to make it a bit higher level with more ATK and DEF because level 4 is a very generic level so you won't even need the effects of your other monsters to special summon this one. Anyway, why those this one have Claw where the others have creature, is there some hidden meaning behind that?

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I'm not good at backgrounds but I'll try. (^_^)

And is it better if they have different colors? (I just make them that way so that they're better related to each other.) :D

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The picture of this one is nice again but they start to look to much a like because your color scheme on them is very alike and the backgrounds are very simple and pretty much the same. So I would (if I could draw) change the backgrounds a bit' date=' add a few little details or something. As for your monster, I like it a lot but I suggest to make it a bit higher level with more ATK and DEF because level 4 is a very generic level so you won't even need the effects of your other monsters to special summon this one. Anyway, why those this one have Claw where the others have creature, is there some hidden meaning behind that?

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I'm not good at backgrounds but I'll try. (^_^)

And is it better if they have different colors? (I just make them that way so that they're better related to each other.) :D

Thats not really what I'm saying. You shouldn't change it so that you end up with every monster being a different color because than you would really lose the related thing (which is a good thing) you wanted to have them. You could just add some colors or as an example you could replace the Blue used on the monsters with a different kind of blue (lighter/darker). Maybe just change the glow of your monsters to a different color each.

But the main problem really is the background. The fact that you only use blue in your sea/ocean (it is water right?) makes it harder for you to make them stand out. And you also use a lot of blue on your monsters that blends in just perfect with your background leaving just some parts that are very alike (of course if you look very focused there hardly is a problem but I don't think it should be like that)

 

So my suggestion is, Take your monsters out of your dark blue ocean and put them in a much lighter blue lake (if it still blends to much with the blue on your monsters you could darken there blue a bit) then you could put some little thinks like simple fishes, clamps or sea weed to make each background a bit more unique.

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The picture of this one is nice again but they start to look to much a like because your color scheme on them is very alike and the backgrounds are very simple and pretty much the same. So I would (if I could draw) change the backgrounds a bit' date=' add a few little details or something. As for your monster, I like it a lot but I suggest to make it a bit higher level with more ATK and DEF because level 4 is a very generic level so you won't even need the effects of your other monsters to special summon this one. Anyway, why those this one have Claw where the others have creature, is there some hidden meaning behind that?

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I'm not good at backgrounds but I'll try. (^_^)

And is it better if they have different colors? (I just make them that way so that they're better related to each other.) :D

Thats not really what I'm saying. You shouldn't change it so that you end up with every monster being a different color because than you would really lose the related thing (which is a good thing) you wanted to have them. You could just add some colors or as an example you could replace the Blue used on the monsters with a different kind of blue (lighter/darker). Maybe just change the glow of your monsters to a different color each.

But the main problem really is the background. The fact that you only use blue in your sea/ocean (it is water right?) makes it harder for you to make them stand out. And you also use a lot of blue on your monsters that blends in just perfect with your background leaving just some parts that are very alike (of course if you look very focused there hardly is a problem but I don't think it should be like that)

 

So my suggestion is, Take your monsters out of your dark blue ocean and put them in a much lighter blue lake (if it still blends to much with the blue on your monsters you could darken there blue a bit) then you could put some little thinks like simple fishes, clamps or sea weed to make each background a bit more unique.

 

I'll try my best. (Backgrounds really aren't my strong points) (^_^)

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