BoltDragon Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 New card I made for a set or Structure deck I am going to make. Still dont know how it will be called. Please Comment and Rate! 請評論和速率! [spoiler=Celestial Mech Khaos] Hope you liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeofthedeck Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Nice card. Don't have time for an eyeofthedeck (Kind of like a Weather Report for cards) so I will just rate.. OCG needs fixing so 7-ish/10. Can't make up my mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltDragon Posted September 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 I see no OCG errors... Whats wrong? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 just capitalising mistakes.Also, its stats are too high for a 1 tribute monster.lower them a little at least. otherwise its not too bad.its effect is sub-standard to say the least.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Ocg errors. Pic is a bit blurry. It's defense is too high with that high of an attack. Pick one or make it level 7. Effect is okay. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakashi516 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 not to badyou should up the level for its atk/defnice effect8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeofthedeck Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 OCG errors are just capitalization mistakes and you missed out a word or two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltDragon Posted September 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 (kind of) fixed it. the pic is blurry on purpose by the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 *This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or below Machine-Type monster from your Deck in face-down defense position.* I am absolutely positive that's correct. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 *This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle' date=' you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or below Machine-Type monster from your Deck in face-down defense position.* I am absolutely positive that's correct. =D[/quote']No...it isn't...:Pit goes Defense Position but everything else it's ok...:Dthe card is meh...nothing special...the effect is so unoriginal...pic is blurry... rate: 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 OCG correction is up, the stats suit the effect well, though it's still bland 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Effect is bland like up there ^ but i like machines 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltDragon Posted September 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 I changed the effect and added a drawback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeDeFiA Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Eh Grammar/OCG <3 pic 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Eternity Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 OCG errors and the picture does not quite fit the name... It's effect is ok and I do think it should be a level 7. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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