.:Traceur:. Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 hmm..I don't know but it seems a little bit OP'd to me...You should put a drawback...but it's a quite good card...I like the holo and pic...:Dtype= TypeOcg is good... rate 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Added Holo Thanks. I felt an OP in it too but, I'll wait for more people to point them out. OCG Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Kocrow17 Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Alright. My advice: 1) Change the number of stars to 6. A Monarch can be summoned for 1 Tribute, has more ATK, has an instant effect, and the player doesnt' need another machine on the field. 2) Raise its ATK to 2100. The player not only needs a monster to tribute for it... but also another one (specifically a machine) to make its ATK descent and its effect usable? Nah. At least if they go through the effort of summoning it, it should be able to match a Cyber Dragon without a machine, and beat a Monarch with a common machine equipped to it like one of the Gadgets. 3) Change its name to "Dark-Engine Dragon"....It sounds cooler. XD I hope this advice has helped you. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 1) Still, I think that Would OP it.2) Read 13) Maybe..... But Thank you for the Advice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 The Scenario: You were finally able to sacrifice two monsters to summon your Engine Dragon! But have no more monsters for its effect. =( On my turn I summon Zaborg and blow it apart. OR. I special Summon Cyber Dragon and kill it. Even in the event you manage to pull of a Machine Duplication combo and summon three machines (two of which are sacrificed). Your Engine Dragon would only have 2000 ATK. Since you can't use its affect during my turn, you can get raped by Cyber Dragon... or a Monarch if I SS a monster first for a tribute... or SS that monarch from the grave. Sorry I use the Monarchs as an example so much, but they're the power that defines a created cards balance. They take no effort to summon and have instant effects. I'm just trying to take away some of the effort in summoning your created card so it would be more used if it was real. What I'm saying is that I suggested those changes because I thought your card could truely benefit from them without becoming an unstoppable force. If you don't want to make the changes, that's alright, I won't persist any further than this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I'll Think about lowering The Star Cost, I only made the Card have low atk and a high amount of stars is because I don't want is to Get OP'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I like your way of thinking. I've seen so many people recklessly make overpowered monsters (I recall one that was a 3000 ATK beatstick that reborned everytime it was killed) that it's nice to see a member that values balance. A rep to you, sir! Carry on the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Thanks! I just thught of the ways this thing can be Overused. I have an idea Which I may use. Increasing it's ATK but not allowing it to be Special Summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 A good idea to prevent it from being SS. I think a boost to 2100 ATK would be appropriate, or whatever you find balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 2100 It Is, It'll be up When I'm Done Advance Holoing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate_Card_Kreator Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Awesome pic and very good effect.9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted September 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltDragon Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 very unique effect. It has only 1 ocg error "...Increase this card (ATK not attack) by the amount...".Not a fan of holos, the first one was better for me. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted September 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Thanks. I'll Fix that When I'm Done Holoing. Lol, i never Holoed the pic itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 good card 9/10 pic is great, but change may to can Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted September 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Damn, Nm, will do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakashi516 Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 great effect awesome pic9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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