Chaotix166 Posted September 17, 2009 Report Share Posted September 17, 2009 IMG Credit to myhouse1263 http://media.photobucket.com/image/gothic%20angel/myhouse1263/Gothic_Angel.jpg IMG Credit to randomdeatheater http://media.photobucket.com/image/black%20and%20red%20dragon/randomdeatheater/Dragon_Wallpaper.jpg This card is treated as a LIGHT monster. Pay 200 Life Points during your Standby Phase. When this card is Normal Summoned, put 1 "Dark Soul" token and 1 "Light Soul" token on this card. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 "Dark Soul" token or 1 "Light Soul" token. When a "Dark Soul" token is tributed, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. When a "Light Soul" token is tributed, increase your Life Points by 500.j IMG Credit to Google Imageshttp://www.animeforum.com/uploads/AngelOfDeath2.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackHaloRose Posted September 17, 2009 Report Share Posted September 17, 2009 All your stuff is pretty much balanced. OCG needs some work. "Remove Counters to do "Also The Light Afflicted Demon is apparently just treated as a Light monster by the wording of the card. I think you are going for both, so you should change the text to "This card is also treated as a LIGHT monster."Pictures are fairly good, first picture is lowered a little too much, but that is easy to correct. Also that dragon looks a bit too friendly.Effects seem fine, nothing ground-breaking, but they work.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix166 Posted September 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2009 Thanks. I'll keep these things in mind for future cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yodog91 Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 kewl cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 you can use the OCG thread to help you on the OCG errors, overall the effects are quite balanced enough to get 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 its not tokens but counters... (tokens are monsters...)aggron is way up'ed.its effect is just bad on your behalf....pictures look good.. but the ocg and effects need some reworking.overall6.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Princess Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 Nice cards, OCG has mistakes but balanced, I think ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 you don't place Tokens, it's Countersplus, Aggron is a pokemon, you'd wanna change the name of that card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix166 Posted September 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 thanks everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 All your stuff is pretty much balanced. OCG needs some work. "Remove Counters to do "Also The Light Afflicted Demon is apparently just treated as a Light monster by the wording of the card. I think you are going for both' date=' so you should change the text to "This card is also treated as a LIGHT monster."Pictures are fairly good, first picture is lowered a little too much, but that is easy to correct. Also that dragon looks a bit too friendly.Effects seem fine, nothing ground-breaking, but they work.7/10[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix166 Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 ok.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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