dimented dimentio Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 well,here it is.tell me my mistakes if i have any.and so i depart like a sailor going to antartica,ciao! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToxicLatte Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 OCG and grammar errors. -2Traps cannot be quickplays. -2Would be better off as a magic/ritual card. -1Your first card. +1 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 There's no such thing as a Quick-Play Trap Card I can't understand your effect, plus OCG is poor But since this is your first card, I'll go easy on you. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 OCG and grammar errors. -2Traps cannot be quickplays. -2Would be better off as a magic/ritual card. -1Your first card. +1 6/10 what s/he said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 OCG errors, Quick Play trap, the whole deal.Since this is your first card - 6.2/10If it wasn't - 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Darklink401 is right.6.32/10(First Card) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 OCG and grammar errors. -2Traps cannot be quickplays. -2Would be better off as a magic/ritual card. -1Your first card. +1 6/10 yeah that, if i could see the card. Apparently it's not that great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dimented dimentio Posted September 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 ah heroes the forlon group.your tears flow like sad chowder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 This is the Pop Culture Section! Is this from a TV show, movie, book, or what? If it isn't from any of those then it doesn't belong here. However, if it is Pop Culture and I just haven't heard of it then the card isn't very good. The OCG isn't well composed and the image isn't very flattering. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
$ûþ®èmè Kì�§ Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Errors: Bad OCG, Traps cant be Quick Plays, Pay 3000 Life Points! WHAT!? Overall Rating: 5.5/10 (Since its your first card im going easy on you) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 OCG, can't be Quick-Play, and how powerful is your Super-Dimentio card? Paying 3000 LP is a lot.6/10 (With consideration its your first card) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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