ragnarok1945 Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 so you've got plenty of time till that, everything will be just fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted November 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 I'll have to pay for the train and the hotel myself. The con entrance is free, but the drinks seem to be very expensive. Also, I'm wotking on chapter 6, which is a bit lengthier than other chapters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 that's great to hear' date=' so when is the Expo supposed to be?[/quote'] May 2010. two years before 2012 lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 I'll have to pay for the train and the hotel myself. The con entrance is free' date=' but the drinks seem to be very expensive. Also, I'm wotking on chapter 6, which is a bit lengthier than other chapters.[/quote'] So don't drink. It's not that hard to resist such a temptation you know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 Yo, lately I've felt badly about not reading further than the first chapter of your story, and so I read THE SECOND chapter today!! And my thoughts on them? They were harshly realistic!! I felt badly when I realized that this girl wouldn't be winning today! We're not accustomed to seeing the good guys lose! So I think you helped us identify with the main character really well, and your realism is top-notch. The only bad things I noticed were FEW typing errors. Only two or three. So that one loss taught me that you put SO MUCH EFFORT into this story, and I shall now read one chapter a day!! Hoorah!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 As the Great Deku Tree once said: whenever main characters can afford to lose a card game, the must. Got that, Navi? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 I don't recall that from Ocarina of Time anywhere Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 I don't recall that from Ocarina of Time anywhere That's because OoT only showed the last 20 minutes of the Tree's life. But he did say it very often when he still was alive. He just loved reading YuGiOh fanfiction. Anyways: chapter 6 is being betaread at the moment. EDIT: Chapter 6 is up. Hurray for terrible Decks that are qualified as being super special awesome in fanfiction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 personally I dislike the use the bible in the chapter, but fortunately that was only a small part of it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 personally I dislike the use the bible in the chapter' date=' but fortunately that was only a small part of it[/quote'] Then I advise you never to read 'His Dark Materials' by Pullman. Over a thousand pages and God was mentioned in more than half of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 My thoughts on Chapter 3: I liked the duel, it had some cool stuff in it. My only problem is... Agido. You said it was a red orb. It had a big eye and wore golden armor on its body. An orb... with a body?! That sounds a little funny. I also liked your use of the Konami code, whether they used it in the actual anime or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 personally I dislike the use the bible in the chapter' date=' but fortunately that was only a small part of it[/quote'] Then I advise you never to read 'His Dark Materials' by Pullman. Over a thousand pages and God was mentioned in more than half of them. oh don't worry, I'll just think during that whole time what he said is complete BS anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted November 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 personally I dislike the use the bible in the chapter' date=' but fortunately that was only a small part of it[/quote'] Then I advise you never to read 'His Dark Materials' by Pullman. Over a thousand pages and God was mentioned in more than half of them. oh don't worry, I'll just think during that whole time what he said is complete BS anyway Yes indeed. All hail the church of scientology. My thoughts on Chapter 3: I liked the duel' date=' it had some cool stuff in it. My only problem is... Agido. You said it was a red orb. It had a big eye and wore golden armor on its body. An orb... with a body?! That sounds a little funny. I also liked your use of the Konami code, whether they used it in the actual anime or not.[/quote'] Solution: Agido is an orb-like creature. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 I never even heard of the church of scientology, that seems illogical To me church and science don't mix very well, kind of like that Simpsons episode where the answer to all scientific discoveries in the world is "God did it" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Y-YOU MEAN AGIDO, THE FAIRY WHO IS AN EGG-GUY WITH A GOLDENEYE AND PINCHIES?!?! OH NOOOOOOOO!! THOSE 32 LIVES IN CONTRA CAN'T SAVE ME NOW!! Anyways, now to type up some dumb fanfiction!! *cool theme song plays* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted November 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Y-YOU MEAN AGIDO' date=' THE FAIRY WHO IS AN EGG-GUY WITH A GOLDENEYE AND PINCHIES?!?! OH NOOOOOOOO!! THOSE 32 LIVES IN CONTRA CAN'T SAVE ME NOW!! Anyways, now to type up some dumb fanfiction!! *cool theme song plays*[/quote'] Yeah, that's what Kazuki said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted November 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Bump.Chapter 7 should be out before tomorrow.Then I'll take a two-week break due to exams coming up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted November 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Chapter 7 is up!Moments like this will either win me some readers or lose me some readers. Probably the latter. Added a new cosplay photo I found, too. It's in the "Sponored by..." section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 I've finally read chapter 4. The things I liked: 1. The funky tune! Can't go wrong with the word 'funky'. 2. There's a guy with a mustache. No matter who it may be, if there's a guy with a mustache, the scene feels AWESOME. 3. Absolutely EVERYTHING is determined with card games! I wish the real world had to do with a game. Unless we killed people. That would be bad. 4. Greed hits you with a big block of gold in a comical way (or at least, that's how I see it). It's cool! BAD STUFFS: You called Greed a "Trad Card". What color is that kind of card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 great way for ridding your opponent So now it's obviously Roosovelt has died Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Yay! Positive criticism!That means I can actually replace all the "Oh no I lost a card game now I'll disappear forever without any reason!" by some more epic injuries and Death Duels. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 you said killing, not disappear for no reason whatsoever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Okay, sorry to tell you guys, but I won't update anything until let's say the twentieth.While I'm doing exams and things, you guys'll be pretty bored.That's why I'm just going to give a little spoiler of what you're going to see in 2010:[spoiler=Decktypes of which I'm sure a character will use on-screen]FrogsX-SaberExodiaJunk / SynchroDragon / Fiend / BeatdownBlackwingsCounter FairiesDAD [spoiler=Decks that will be used, but not a guaranteed on-screen appearance]FlamvellIce BarrierPsychicRed-EyesAlly of JusticePenguinsBatterymen Also, I'm still looking for a Deck that could be suitable for ... a midget vertically challenged person.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 yeah yeah it's that time of the year, I know I'm slowing down greatly myself here too you know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted December 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 My exams are over, I'll get my report card tomorrow.I will start working on the next chapter soon, and since I've been neglecting this fic, I'm going to leave a boring filler without any plot-realated things nor character development out, and whatever character development that was planned to be in it will be replaced. Chapter 7 will be a longer one, even with the Duel cut in 2 parts. Right now, this fic isn't satisfying yet. As I've mentioned before, the plot will thicken troughout December/January, and after that there will be loads of Duels with up-to-date Decktypes. I'm planning to use all the TCG Duel Terminal archetypes for the moment, but also some older ones. Also; don't blame me for injuring your favourite 5D's character (me guessing around February), but I actually can't stand him because his Decktype annoys me IRL. (Spoilers!) I didn't want him to be in this fic originally, but since it takes place in the dimension of 5D's, somewhere in the six months between season 1 and 2, I'm kinda forced to include him.I hope I can update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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