Namo™ Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 [align=center] Holo Done by meCard: [spoiler=Lore]Discard 1 card and remove from play 1 monster on the field. Once per turn, by discarding 1 card from your Hand, Special Summon 1 "Locust-Like Creature Token"(Insect-Type/WIND/level 5/ATK 2000/ DEF 2000) to your side of the field. Everytime a "Locust-Like Creature Token" is Summoned, place 1 Counter on each of your opponents monster.(Even Face-Down monsters) Monsters with Counters on them cannot be destroyed by battle involving a "Locust-Like Creature Token(s)" [spoiler=Trivia]Abaddon is a Demon known as the Demon of the Bottomless Pit. He is said to bring the apocolypes. He controls creatures that are Locus-Like in structure but have the face of Men, the hair of Women, the tails of Scorpians, and the teeth of Lions. These Locus torment humans for 6 months before the apocolypes. [spoiler=Effect]The "Remove from Play" effect came from the "Bottomless Trap Hole" Card, seeing as Abaddon is the Demon of the Bottomless Pit. The "Locus" effect came from the creatures he controls. The "Not destroyed by battle effect" came from the reason that the Locus torment humans, not destroys them. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 The OCG looks weird"by discarding 1 card from your Hand and Special Sumon 1 "locust....."..(for example) The idea is good, the OCG has some errors (face-down monsters for example)The Pic is great!!!7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Man, those are not OCG errors, they are English grammar errors! Ad you should fix them. As for the effect, I think it is underpowered. I mean, after 4 turns you will have 5 monsters with 2400 ad 2000 attack, and your opponent will have 3 or 4 monsters, all that cannot be destroyed by battle. Your opponent should thank you for this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Nice card, I have a better pic with Abbadon (used it once in a set) if you want it PM me.A 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 weird but epic looking picture, might want to say for the tokens that they can't attack to better balance it 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 The OCG looks weird"by discarding 1 card from your Hand and Special Sumon 1 "locust....."..(for example) The idea is good' date=' the OCG has some errors (face-down monsters for example)The Pic is great!!!7/10[/quote'] Man' date=' those are not OCG errors, they are English grammar errors! Ad you should fix them. As for the effect, I think it is underpowered. I mean, after 4 turns you will have 5 monsters with 2400 ad 2000 attack, and your opponent will have 3 or 4 monsters, all that cannot be destroyed by battle. Your opponent should thank you for this![/quote'] Nice card' date=' I have a better pic with Abbadon (used it once in a set) if you want it PM me.A 7.8/10[/quote'] weird but epic looking picture' date=' might want to say for the tokens that they can't attack to better balance it 8/10[/quote'] Thanks guys >_> and sorry I fixed the grammar in the first sentence Thanks for the ratings! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 I activate Bottomless Trap Hole when you summon. Ha, just kidding. pic is good, ocg errors have been pointed out. effect is different and i agree with ragnarok's fix. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coffee Black Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 i know the ATK and DEF make it balanced, but it's still really strong to me. I'm not calling it OP though. 8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted September 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Thanks for all your comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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