hollowmaster999 Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 So, this is a card I created to be a powerful draw engine. Hope everyone likes it... [spoiler=Card Effect] When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can put 1 "Draw Counter" on this card (Max 4). You can remove "Draw Counters" from this card to draw a card for each counter removed. During each of your Standby Phases, send 2 random cards from your Deck to the Graveyard (This is not optional). The deck is then shuffled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 way op'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Okay, suggestion for what to change it to? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Yeahhh, it's overpowered for a few reasons.1. Draw Power: Whenever you destroy by battle, you draw 2 cards? To much. Maybe put on counters, and remove counters to draw? :/2. Choosing cards to send to Graveyard: Makes it WAY to easy to summon DAD, and others. Maybe send the top 3? Then you can't send 3 darks, and summon DAD.3. Piercing Damage: Already to powerful. I think it'll be okay if you make a few changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Eh, I didn't even think about the DAD and stuff. I don't use it. Well, toned it done a bit, none the less. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Much better. :) However, you could make it so you draw cards equal to the number of counters removed. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Okay, changed it so the Max counters is 4, and you draw 1 card for each counter removed. Thanks for the suggestions! Any, rates, now that it's fixed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Current card: 8/10If you choose to reduce the ATK to 2500, I will give 9/10, because this way you will draw a LOT of cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 I made ATK 2700 because of the two tributes. If I made it 2500 it would be kind of weak, and could be destroyed easily... I think I'll keep it this way for now, thanks though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 I can't read it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Sorry about that, Voltaic. I posted the effect under it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Kinda like the pic. It is fairly well balanced. Some minor OCG errors, still quite good OCG though.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Could you let me know the OCG errors? I'm trying to keep it as close to perfect as possible, so if you could put the changed OCG, I'd appreciate it! Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rise of the Eldrazi Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 OCG:If this card destroys a monster by battle, you can put 1 Draw Counter on this card (Max 4). You can remove Draw Counters from this card to draw a card for each counter removed. During each of your Standby Phases, send 3 random cards from your Deck to the Graveyard (This is not optional). The deck is then shuffled.Not bad overall, it would be cool if you put a card in the background or something.8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillerCubivore Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 The idea is original I like it. Good pic, it's a little squished vertically. The name is kinda lame if you ask me, but it'll suffice. I basically agree with everyone else, its attack is a bit too high. (even though it's two tributes)If it was a real card it would probably get slapped into Lightsworn decks because it's Light (which means you can use it with Honest) and it draws and it mills. It's almost too perfect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Thanks for the fixes and rate! Also, I've never seen a card say "If this card destroys a monster by battle..." I checked a bunch of cards and they all say "When", but the other stuff I'll fix right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 sending 3 cards from your deck to the graveyard is a bit too high for EACH turn, maybe drop it to 2 cards 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Okay, thanks for the rate and suggest. ragnarok. Change made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 sending 3 cards from your deck to the graveyard is a bit too high for EACH turn' date=' maybe drop it to 2 cards 8/10[/quote']You're kidding, right? If Konami made this into a real card, they would find it necessary to send 10 cards to the Graveyard every turn - that's how much they hate drawing. I would say sending 3 is the MINIMUM. And no, you do NOT have to say "the Deck is then shuffled". You haven't had to put that in for ages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Eh, okay? So do you like the card? Plus, it can't be that great, it can be destroyed fairly easily... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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