snake_boy Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 This is my first shot with my war cards Critism expected, help appreciated, and don't bother saying about the fake types Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charming Leo Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 GO FAKE TYPES!!!10/10 coz of the fake types!!!ATTACK!!!ps: 1st one needs to say "...twice in one turn" :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snake_boy Posted September 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 -What does the Subtype "Warfare" do? Lots of OCG errors, and most effects are overpowered combined with their stats. My fixes:"If there are at least 3 monsters your opponent controls, by discarding 1 card, this card can attack twice during your Battle Phrase." "This card cannot be attacked by an EARTH monster. This card can attack your opponent directly with half of its original ATK." "This card cannot attack. During your opponent's Battle phrase, he/she must attack this card first." "Activate this card when an EARTH monster declares an attack. Destroy the attacking monster." "This card can only be equipped to a monster with "Tank" in its name. If there are no EARTH monsters your opponent controls, the equipped monster can attack your opponent directly." Images could be better 5.5/10. It had potential, but not used properly. Keep it up! I've seen worse. If you need any help, you can PM me. EDIT: You do not need to post again to show updated cards, but you can edit your first post, delete the original card URL, and put in the new one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snake_boy Posted September 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 Thanks for the help starly_64 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 You forgot the "." in all cards Snake, you could fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 Nice cards and all OCG errors I see have already been saidOnce fixed I give 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casmy Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Good Types, but you should write Machine-Warfare (like Beast-Warrior), instead of Machine/ Warfare. Change the second image. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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