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Just an random card.

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Lore: This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Tribute summoned, discard your entire hand and draw 1 card. Once per turn, you can remove from play 3 cards in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Devourer Token" (Reptile-Type/FIRE/Level 3/ATK 0/DEF 0). "Devourer Tokens" cannot attack or be Tributed for a Tribute Summon. Once per turn, you can Tribute 3 "Devourer Token" to remove from play all cards in your opponent's hand.

Pic Credit: GraySapphire

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9/10

good pic and great effect that have some errors:

"discard your hand and draw 1 card"

after fixing "discard your entire hand and draw 1 card"

"remove 3 Card's from your Graveyard from play to special".

after fixing "remove 3 Cards in your Graveyard from play to Special".

" "Devourer Token's cannot Attack ".

after fixing " "Devourer Token" cannot Attack ".

"Tribute 3 "Devourer Token's" to remove your opponents hand from play".

after fixing "Tribute 3 "Devourer Token" to remove your opponents entire hand from play".

 

I think you should change it to EARTH attributes and give it 2300 DEF or may be 2500.

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MY OCG FIX: [it's up to you if you would change it]

This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Tribute summoned, discard your entire hand and draw 1 card. Once per turn, you can remove from play 3 cards in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Devourer Token" (Reptile-Type/FIRE/Level 3/ATK 0/DEF 0). "Devourer Tokens" cannot attack or be Tributed for a Tribute Summon. Once per turn, you can Tribute 3 "Devourer Token" to remove from play all cards in your opponent's hand.

 

8.6/10

 

Good.

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