Lexadin Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Just an random card.Lore: This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Tribute summoned, discard your entire hand and draw 1 card. Once per turn, you can remove from play 3 cards in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Devourer Token" (Reptile-Type/FIRE/Level 3/ATK 0/DEF 0). "Devourer Tokens" cannot attack or be Tributed for a Tribute Summon. Once per turn, you can Tribute 3 "Devourer Token" to remove from play all cards in your opponent's hand.Pic Credit: GraySapphire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Looks to me like an insect and not a reptile... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Well, actually it is an Salamander (The Mythological kind) so reptile fits fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 lol, I thought of it more like a worm.Side: Why did you Cap the R in Remove?Should have been "remove your opponent's hand from play.":\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 AHHHHHRRRRGGGGG! Your right!I'll change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shin~ Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 9/10good pic and great effect that have some errors:"discard your hand and draw 1 card"after fixing "discard your entire hand and draw 1 card""remove 3 Card's from your Graveyard from play to special".after fixing "remove 3 Cards in your Graveyard from play to Special"." "Devourer Token's cannot Attack ".after fixing " "Devourer Token" cannot Attack "."Tribute 3 "Devourer Token's" to remove your opponents hand from play".after fixing "Tribute 3 "Devourer Token" to remove your opponents entire hand from play". I think you should change it to EARTH attributes and give it 2300 DEF or may be 2500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 its very good. i dont think the Attack part about the token needs to be capitalised though.other ocg errors KING already posted.8.6/10 the card might be a bit UP'ed though. but its good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 the OCG errors have already been pointed out, and the effect is well balanced since the tokens can still be used for synchro summon anyway Still, to hold its own I suggest you raise the atk to at least 2200 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Tnx for the ratings, I've updated it and raised it's ATK and DEF a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 MY OCG FIX: [it's up to you if you would change it] This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Tribute summoned, discard your entire hand and draw 1 card. Once per turn, you can remove from play 3 cards in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Devourer Token" (Reptile-Type/FIRE/Level 3/ATK 0/DEF 0). "Devourer Tokens" cannot attack or be Tributed for a Tribute Summon. Once per turn, you can Tribute 3 "Devourer Token" to remove from play all cards in your opponent's hand. 8.6/10 Good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 tnx for the fix, but i'll wait to see what everyone says. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 ok, since you lowered the atk I'll raise my rate to 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 The OCG correction is up. The effect is balanced and an ok card. Maybe change the attribute to EARTH but i guess its not vital to the card. 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Correct OCG (Again:-?)I made it a Fire type, becouse salamander's where Creatures of Fire and yes, it is a Salamander.Tnx for the comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 BUMB Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 -Great pic! (where did you found it? xD) -Neat effect -No OCG errors for me -10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Tnx, and is that question serious? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 could be? heb je het van deviant art (haha xD) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Dude, ben je Nederland's? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 tuurlijk wat dacht je xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 weet ik veel, je kon ook Belgisch zijn, en heel mischien ook Zuid-Afrikaans. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 hahahahaha xD ik ben vlaams xD (en kun je mijn vanilla noten :D) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Ok. En tuurlijk kan ik dat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 I raise my rate now to 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Tnx, I see that you've changed your name? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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