Mindscatter Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 [spoiler=Lore]This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by removing from play "Orb of the Restrained Soul" from your Graveyard. When this monster attacks a Defense Position monster, destroy it without applying Damage Calculation. If it was face-down, do not Flip it face-up. If this monster attacks directly, its ATK becomes 3000. [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play "Orb of the Restrained Soul" from your Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of Battle. This monster cannot be targeted by attacks while in Defense Position. Once per turn, you can destroy one of your opponent's set Spell or Trap Cards. [spoiler=Special] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 ocg erros in both effect monster.your missing"This cannot be Normal Summoned or Set."on the Djinn card. change nor be selected as an attack target. tothis card cannot be selected as an attack target while in Defense Position.opponent's doesnt need capitalisation and set doesnt either.the souls DEF is insane... reduce it. for a 3 stars its way to much.overall, ok job. pictures are good. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted September 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 What do you mean by that?? AG Moving fortress has 2200 DEF AND can attack directly, but nobody EVER said it is overpowered! And this just has 50 more DEF...I think it's balanced.Can I get anymore opinions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 I can't read the lore for Efreeti and Djinn. Can you write them out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted September 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 The letters look pretty big to me, but meh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 that's better, now I can put the rate to 8.5/10 here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
::тǿρħєя:: Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 I'll comment on your vanilla first. 1. brake, when used like that, should be spelled "break." Your version means, like, the car brake, while mine means destroy.2. it says it doesn't know if it's good or evil, yet you made it light :P Now for the rest. 1. When you attack a DEF-Pos. Monster, damage is always 0 anyway, unless you have a special card such as Ebon Arrow or Fairy Meteor Crush. Considering all that, I'd say 7-8/10. Good job overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 What do you mean by that?? AG Moving fortress has 2200 DEF AND can attack directly' date=' but nobody EVER said it is overpowered! And this just has 50 more DEF...I think it's balanced.[hr']Can I get anymore opinions? fortess is 4 stars, if i remember correctly.your monster is 3.now that you've changed it to four. its ok. ill raise rate to 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate_Card_Kreator Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Good cards and nice effects but i don't like the effect monsters' pic.8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Not bad, but "Efreeti" is a bit to OP in my oppinion, becouse it gains 1000 ATK when attacking directly.A 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Well he gotta be a strongass with that kind of name! And Topher the effect MAKES sense. If this monster attacks a Mil Shield, I would normally lose 1000 LP, but I don't. Got it? and about the brake stuff:I hate my keyboard... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Wait! What you're saying doesn't make any sence, it gains ATK when attacking DIRECTLY not when attacking monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 ........read Topher's post. He said battle damage with a def position monster is always 0. Now, about my example: efreeti has 2000 atk, and mil shield 3000 def. So what i said was that if efreeti wouldn't have the no battle damage effect then I would take 1000 damage. Got it now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Ohhhh! I got it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Don't worry, I am really good at not being understanded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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