mattmaister2 Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 *NOTE* I did not create the pictures used in these cards! *NOTE* Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Tharak Ak-Var". When this is summoned to the field, return cards on the field to the owners hand equal to the number of "Prophet of Ak-Var" in your graveyard and activate one of the following effects:- Increase the attack of this card by 300 for each Fire Monster in your graveyard.- Destroy this card to Special Summon up to three level 3 or lower Fire Monsters from your graveyard. Effect: During your Standby Phase, by sending this face-up card to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Flamebird Ak-Var" from your hand or Deck. When this card is sent to the graveyard by this effect you may select up to four level 3 or lower Fire monsters from your deck and send them to the graveyard. For each card sent to the graveyard by this effect, you lose 1000 life-points. Effect: During the End Phase that this card was summoned chose from one of the following effects:- Destroy this card.- Reduce your life-points by 600.- Place this card in your deck, shuffle it and draw one card. Description: Return up to 2 cards from the field to the bottom of its owners deck and Special Summon a "Tharak Ak-Var" from your hand or deck. This card can only be activated during your opponents turn. For each Stand-by phase this card is face-up, add one counter to this card. If this card is destroyed by your opponents card effect, inflict 500 damage to both you and your opponent for each counter on this card. Send this card to the graveyard to special summon a Fire monster from your deck which level is equal to the amount of counters on this card. Please rate and give comments :D Edited: 10-03-2009 07:34 AM- Reduced the effect and AP of Flamebird- Reduced the effect and AP of Prophet- Increased the effect of Burning Evacuation Edited: 10-03-2009 08:48 AM- Added card: Fires of Creation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 This looks like the beginning of a great set. OCG looks perfect, pictures are good. Only thing I have to say is that for "Flamebird" maybe change the effect to only summon 2 monsters, because if the LV3 monsters are like "Prophet", the flamebird's effect would be abit OP. Also, maybe lower the original ATK or the ATK gain, because that could get really powerful too fast... But anywho, nice start, I'll keep my eye on this if you continue. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattmaister2 Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Thanks for the comments and feedback :), I'll take it into consideration and develope it further tomorrow. Now I think it's time to get some sleep tho, it's 01:00 over here allrdy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 only Burning Evacuation's effect is dull compared to the others, perhaps adding another effect would help 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 the cards look good but i think the Flamebird is a bit too op'ed.its returns everything and get an increase or a special summon. add a drawback to it and your good.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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