Luke 04 Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 It's the first time i publish a card. I will try to create belanced and nice cards and i'd like to know what do you think about them. For now i hope you'll enjoy my very first card as well as me. Waiting for answers and opinionsP.S. I apologize myself for my not perfect english (i'm italian) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 OCG:"When you activate this card, you can choose 1 of the following effects:- Draw 2 cards. Increase your opponent's Life Points by 2000 points.- Increase your Life Points by 2000 points. Your opponent must draw 2 cards. Why the hell would someone choose the first effect? :PPic is good. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 pic is win When you activate this card, you can choose 1 of the following effects:- Draw 2 cards. Increase your opponent's Life Points by 1000 points.- Increase your Life Points by 1000 points. Your opponent must draw 2 cards.[/Code] OCG + Effect fix 2000 is lol to much ~8/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horologia Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Hi there,dont mind some english-mistakes, they wont be angry with you ^^(im from Austria, and im pretty sure, my english isnt perfect too, butas you can see, im still alive XD) To your card: Pic is awesome!The Effect is... well, change it to 1000 Life Points, and everythingwould be fine. No one would let his opponent get 2000 Life Points, justfor 2 more cards in his hands, most time you would use it to increase your life-points. For a beginner its a verry creative effect ^^ And by the way, welcome to the forum ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 I think that 2000 LP is to much, may want to lower it to 1000 or something like that.The OCG errors are pointed out.A 8.5/10 (After fix) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 first effect you have to be REALLY desperate for the draw power, otherwise everyone will choose option 2 along with the OCG errors, this gets 7.3/10 for now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenstar Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 1000 LP is plenty, XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luke 04 Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 I really like to thank all of you to comment my card. I will change 2000 into 1000 as soon as possible if you think it will be more belanced.Thanks again. : ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Don't change it to 1000.That makes it Upstart Goblin on steroids.1000 + another drawback? Skip next draw phase? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 good cardthe +1 is definitely worth 2000lp to your opponent but maybe reduce it to 1500 could make it slightly more powerful but no too powerful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UDK Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Really, I dont think 2000 is bad. Use this card in combination with a card that switches any life point changes of your opponent's to yours. Nice pic. As for the second part fo the effect, I would think 3 cards would be better. Overall, id give it a 7.5/10. My first card review, done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koshej Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Both drawing additional cards and gaining LPs could be a NEGATIVE thing!There ARE cards that require your LP to be lower than your opponent's or to have very few cards in your hand.So, technically, this effect is NOT stupid - just less useful.Also, it was a very good idea with this EXACT wording order.I'm quite sure - if an effect is negated - you're left with part one while losing part two.If this idea is wrong - switch the order to have the same result.Or it might just be pointless anyways - I need clarification on that, please. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 uhm i dont think if this card was negated anything would happenas the lp gain or draw to your opponent isn't really a cost but part of the effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cardinus X Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 I don't know about all this... Let me just say...Im pro making cards.You wanna see them?Sure...Ill show them to you guys later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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