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Hmm, this could be absolutely epic if you added some depth and lighting. The concept is good, but the arrows and text don't fit at all. Maybe also add some colour? You might also try to make them spiral more into the center as a whole, as of now there re several pieces sticking out at rather random places.

 

But, all that aside, this is definitly your best yet.

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I don't like the arrow in the bg or the really faint text. The font isn't very good.

 

Other than that' date=' it's pretty good :D

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Hmm' date=' this could be absolutely epic if you added some depth and lighting. The concept is good, but the arrows and text don't fit at all. Maybe also add some colour? You might also try to make them spiral more into the center as a whole, as of now there re several pieces sticking out at rather random places.

 

But, all that aside, this is definitly your best yet.

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Thwanks for the cnc, color failed, c4d was black ;D

Depth, need to buy a can of that soon ;3

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