KageKatana Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 [align=center] I fixed the ocg[/align] [align=center]Img credit: wanderly Made for my new set: Dark world[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 post the lore under the card then i can correct your OCG^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 You OCG has some minor mistakes, the effect is balanced but its not too exciting for a LVL 8 Synchro. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
13rats Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 OCG fix: 1 Tuner moster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a Spell or Trap card, you can Special Summon 1 Level 5 "Dark World" monster from your hand or Deck. You might want to change it to "Level 5 or lower", and if you meant that you summon the monster only from your hand or only from your Deck, just change it to fit that. Other than the OCG, I think it's well made, although the effect isn't too original (though you probably made up for that since it's part of a set). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 13rats got here first and said pretty much everything I was going to say xD grave yard = Graveyardas a result of a spell or trap card = by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card.lvl = Levelspecial summon = Special Summon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zombiepromking Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 I believe i've been beaten to any major points. Decent card is decent. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Interesting. Slightly Effective. Overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 it's only bordering the OPed end, which makes it UPed for a synchro, and the OCG errors have been pointed out already 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KageKatana Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Thanks gus i will fix dem errors now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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