Silvercast Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 This is my first card, but its darn good. This card cannot be nrmal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by removing from play 3 Warrior type monsters you control. This card's attribute is also treated as dark. When this card is special summoned you can summon 1 level 6 or lower Warrior type monster from your deck (That card's effect is negated). When this card is destroyed you can summon 1 level 6 or lower warrior type monster from your graveyard (That cards effect is ngated). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Ughh, another noob problem. First you go on the card maker click the card you finished and get the BBcode and post it in the thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silvercast Posted October 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Yeah i got it, somewhat. I've been playing yugioh sinc i was about 10, i'm 19 now, i've finnaly reached a point where i think i have a fair enough understanding of card creation to post some of my favorites. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 I notice lots of OCG errors and it's pretty fair concerning that you have to tribute 2 Warrior type monsters to special summon it. Also, for the part of the effect that goes "that card's effect is negated" change it to "this card is treated as a normal monster card" to better consider its effects obsolete due to the speical summon by this card. It has a fairly high amount of ATK in which should be lowered to about 3000 but that doesn't cause too much problems, the main problem is that you get to special summon a lvl 6 or lower Warrir type monster from your deck in which that should be changed to a lvl 4 or lower otherwise you can just grab Mystic Swordsman Lvl 6 or Silent Swordsman Lvl 5 and speical summon them easily onto the field and they're pretty high hitters for a special summon also (2300 ATK). Overall, its a nice attempt at making a card but with a fairly cheap effect for a monster that's already a high hitter itself. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silvercast Posted October 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 I tried mah best, thx for the tips :) Oh, and its 3 warriors, not 2 :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 The card says 2 warriors not 3 warriors but your lore says 3 warriors so I guess you might wanna change the card to say 3 warrior monsters then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silvercast Posted October 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Musta hit the wrong button, oh well. Here is another one for this set. Me likes :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 I can see errors in your text but don't worry you're still just a new member, At the beginning I believe it should be written "While this card is face-up on the field, its Attribute is also treated as Light." For OCG help try looking at the OCG thread to help you. Good Luck with next card.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
13rats Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 I can see errors in your text but don't worry you're still just a new member' date=' At the beginning I believe it should be written "While this card is face-up on the field, its Attribute is also treated as Light." For OCG help try looking at the OCG thread to help you. Good Luck with next card.8/10[/quote'] This, and: "When this card is sent to the Graveyard by a card effect, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Life and Death Matador" from your Deck during your next Standby Phase." Check over your cards for spelling errors. The pic of Matador isn't too great, mostly because it doesn't have a background. Nice concept, just fix up the spelling and a few OCG mistakes and, like wirespy said, take a look at the OCG thread to make sure your OCG is solid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 Warrior-Type monsters you control. This card's Attribute is also treated as DARK. When this card is Special Summoned' date='[/b'] you can Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Deck. When this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard. The effect(s) of monsters Summoned by this card are negated. That's how I think it goes ;)underlined part is only recomended so that the same note in parenthesis doesn't have to appear twice.Its pretty good. Even if its Level 6 or lower, I can't think of a way to actually abuse this card. 3 Tributes make this fair even with no Level restriction (at least in my opinion ;) ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExtremeG Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 10/10 lol Jotta, you always give 10/10 XD! The pic is really cool, and the effct looks sound. It does seem to be a little bit out of balance, but that's just me. Make sure you take care of those spelling errors.8.8/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 look dont act like u kno wat ur doin when every other word has an ocg error in it here is ocg noob////////////////////////// This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 Warrior-Type monsters you control. This card is also treated as a DARK monster. When this card is Special Summoned you can Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Deck (The Summoned monster cannot activate its effect). When this card is destroyed you can Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard (The Summoned card cannot activate its effect). so great job u made 26 errors so dont talk noob. And this card should not be in the realistic section when you can summon 2 level 6 monsters with one effect. so way to go. dont act like the boss when you have no skills to prove it mister 19 year old. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 too broken of an effect, and the pic is getting overused as well 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 look dont act like u kno wat ur doin when every other word has an ocg error in it here is ocg noob////////////////////////// This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 Warrior-Type monsters you control. This card is also treated as a DARK monster. When this card is Special Summoned you can Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Deck (The Summoned monster cannot activate its effect). When this card is destroyed you can Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard (The Summoned card cannot activate its effect). so great job u made 26 errors so dont talk noob. And this card should not be in the realistic section when you can summon 2 level 6 monsters with one effect. so way to go. dont act like the boss when you have no skills to prove it mister 19 year old. -That's too harsh of a comment for judging someone new, even if there is a good posibility that they are already good at the game. <_<-Tell me 1 Broken combo you can make to justify that this is borken.. because I don't think there's any. You lost 3 Warrior-Type monsters to Special Summon 1 from your hand with good ATK and another high ATK one from your Deck. 3 for 2 is not too much, concidering most likely the 3rth Warrior you are gonna Tribute will be your Normal Summon of the turn and there's really no Warrior that will give you the game for using it with this.... D.D Warrior Lady?... Silent Swordsman LV5?.. That's about what you can do :? I'm guessing the last part of your post is directed to the person who made the thread but that's not clearly stated by you, and I'm the only 19th year old that recently posted here without a hidden birth date so......... <_<and I don't think another correction was needed if you didn't even apport anything new.. in addition to insulting the maker of the card saying he has OCG errors that you corrected but didn't really point out in your correction..GTFO... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 WOAH! Sleepy just swore XD well actually he/she put GTFO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 OCG errors. Also, ~AuXiLiArY~, take it easy on this person. He/she's new >_>I guess this is OK for a newbie, 7.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 NO IVE SEEN HIM POST OTHER COMMENTS BEFORE AND THEY WERE NOT VERY CONSIDERATE SORRY FOR THE MISUNDERSTANDING GUYS BUT TRUST ME HE ISNT ALL THAT KIND TO OTHER USERS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 WTF is with your Caps Lock post?You don't need to go noobish with type of posting. So I suggest you to stop posting noobishly =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 there caps off my bad and is it that time of the month or something cause someone got angry but lets act a bit older and uh STOP SPAMMING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silvercast Posted October 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 He, first off, and yeah i gotta work on the spelling/ grammer blah. What's OCG mean o_O? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 Spelling + OCG Errors This card cannot be Normal summoned or Set. This card can only be Special summoned by removing from play 3 Warrior type monsters you control. This card's Attribute is also treated as DARK. When this card is Special summoned you can Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your deck. (That card's effect(s) is negated). When this card is destroyed you can Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard (That card's effect(s) is negated).[/Code] Nice for a first imo. Effect could be rmoe creative. Pic is nice. ~8.1/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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