Sansukai. The Battle Manica

[DeathSDelano]

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 Dinosaur-Type monsters you control. This card can attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once. Each time this card destroys a monster by battle and sends itt to the Graveyard Special Summon 1 "Tricera token"(Dinosaur-Type/EARTH/Level 6/ATK 0/DEF 2000) on your opponent's side of the field in Defense Position. The "Tricera Token" cannot be used for a Tribute for a Tribute Summon. When a "Tricera Token" is destroyed as a result of battle both players remove from play 1 monster card in their Graveyard from play if not remove from play the top card of both players Deck instead. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard remove from play 3 Dinosaur-Type monsters in your Hand or Deck.

 

 

Name changed

name explaination

San from Sanbai(japanese) meaning "Triple"

Su from Tsuno(japanese) meaning "Horn"

Kai from Hakai(japanese) meaning "Destruction"

 

i purposely design this card to work best in a Macro Dino and to help out give Infinity Tyranno power expect by survival insincts and usual remove card :P

and i'm not completely sure on OCG i just typed how i think it would look

 

rate/hate/comment

[Jazin Kay]

"Tricera" sounds a bit off.

 

"Doom Tricera" sounds way more badass.

[Sleepy]

I know 3 Dinosaur sound like its a fair cost but if you have any effect that makes this pierce, or force monsters into attack position (final attack orders) this pretty much won the game because by killing the Token you will Special Summon another one, which is a new monster that this card is able to attack. Its an infinite cycle.

 

I suggest you change that destroying part to something like:

When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Tricera Token"... bla..bla..bla...

that way you destroying the Token won't trigger the Summoning of another potential attack target.

If you think that by chaning it, it won't be worth Summoning anymore, you can give it piercing to make up for it xD ( or something like that... on second though, piercing can still be pretty powerful ^-^" )

[ragnarok1945]

for the token effect that both players must remove 1 monster from their graveyard from play, you should have added an effect what happens if you or your opponent can't do that (and don't make it an instant win/lose effect)

 

8.9/10

[Chaos Flame]

Thank goodness you didn't saw he had to attack all monsters, because then it would be a 1 card infinite loop, making it unplayable. 8/10

[Alexis Rhodes]

grammer seems fine and the picture is good 8/10;)

[Jolta]

8/10

[DeathSDelano]

changes in bold and was not sure how to word if a player can't do this they have to do this.

and i did not want to give it piercing effect(to unfair)

but throw this plus Final Attack order = Ouch! xD

[Phanax Leminer]

Aiku: Let's correct it!

 

OCG:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 Dinosaur-Type monsters you control. This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each with this card. Each time this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Tricera token"(Dinosaur-Type/EARTH/Level 6/ATK 0/DEF 2000) on your opponent's side of the field in Defense Position. The "Tricera Token" cannot be used for a Tribute for a Tribute Summon. When a "Tricera Token" is destroyed as a result of battle, both players remove from play 1 monster from their Graveyard from play. If not, removed from play the top card from both players Deck instead. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, remove from play 3 Dinosaur-Type monsters from your hand or Deck.

 

Effect: The effect would be perfect for a Wipe Out Deck and there's a lot of effect in it. Maybe too much to.

 

Image and Name: The image is kick bananas, but the name sounds... girly. Find a MAINLY and INTIMADATING name!

 

Overall: 8.4/10

[DeathSDelano]

ok and the attack all monsters on opponent's side of the field is off Ultimate tyranno's text

 

Changed made and name changed as well