red37s Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 sry bout using the storm monarch pic but it seemed to fit, i just started today! tell me wht u all think!oh god! i didnt post the card! Srry bout that. Alright, got it on, srry bout that all. UPDATE! Afetr seeing all the reviews i decided to remake it. This makes "Grotle" less OP but still powerful. Here is the final result. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkhavoc Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 im sorry but this is bad 0/10 because the pic is already a monarch and it isnt a usefull monarch effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
red37s Posted October 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 sry bout using the storm monarch pic but it seemed to fit' date=' i just started today! tell me wht u all think![hr']oh god! i didnt post the card! Srry bout that. Alright, got it on, srry bout that all. eh, thanks for the critique, btw, im a nub at this, anyone know how to add the card to the post W/O adding the attachment? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkhavoc Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 use this pic and change effect http://media.comicvine.com/uploads/0/40/140977-5402-monarch_super.jpgwell when you make the card save it and left click it then underneath it a link should appear copy and paste that into the thread and all should be fine btw you dont have that bad ocg (Y) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 can you post the actual card here and not the attachment? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 can you post the actual card here and not the attachment? I always say that, attachments are bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 You named it after a Pokemon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 0/10 B/c effect is Raiza and effect isn't useful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 To get the card not as an attachment just click on the card at the card maker and copyy/paste the code that appears under it onto the thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 You named it after a Pokemon? Oh my god, I just noticed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 Useless.No originality.Copyed pic that doesnt fit.Please try harder.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 unoriginal nameunoriginal pictureweird effectcreativity = 0effort = +22.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 When this card is Tribute Summoned it's attribute becomes FIRE, WATER, EARTH, WIND, DARK and LIGHT. No problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 I don't use monarchs, but aren't they supposed to have devastating effects? I can see an opponent saying "oooooo...I'm so scared of your multi-Attribute monster. What's it going to do next? change to a Level 3?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
red37s Posted October 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 I just loled at that level 3 comment. srry, i know this one blew, i tried again tho, here is the updated one, tell me what u think of THIS one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 SOOO much better than what you did before. However, this means that "Grotle" will have 2900 ATK... which is overpowered for a 1-tribute. He fits in well with a monarch theme, and seems like the overall ruler-guy, so I would suggest upping his level to 7 or 8 and give him 2500 ATK (just a little more to show that he's the leader of the "Monarchs"). Keep the low defense so he's balanced(-ish) when applied to an Attribute-focused Aggro deck. OCG Fix:"When this card is Tribute Summoned, declare 1 Attribute. This monster's Attribute becomes the selected Attribute. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, monsters with the selected Attribute gain 500 ATK." Your main problem is capitalizing. Clarification words (Attribute, Type, "Venom" Monsters, "Hero" Monsters, "Blackwing" Monsters) words are capitalized, as are the words "Deck" and "Hand". You should also only write "ATK points" as "ATK" -- because ATK is always calculated in points. Other things -- "The" is not capitalized in card names, unless it begins the name. So you should have "Grotle the Element Monarch". And that name sounds weird anyway... change "Element Monarch" to something more flashy -- like "Omnimonarch", "Final Monarch", "Greater Monarch", "Monarch of the End", or even just "Elemental Monarch" (because that just sounds better). And, finally, get rid of the LIMITED EDITION circulation. The card is only 1ST or LIMITED if it has a gold sticker, and you can't get a gold sticker unless you photoshop the picture. So, to keep it realistic, either get someone to photoshop that sticker for you, or take off the circulation. I LOVE the card picture, as well as the idea. In fact, I've made both a Spell & Trap Card for the Monarchs (I was thinking about making a set), and this guy would totally work as the cover card. :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
red37s Posted October 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 SOOO much better than what you did before. However' date=' this means that "Grotle" will have 2900 ATK... which is overpowered for a 1-tribute. He fits in well with a monarch theme, and seems like the overall ruler-guy, so I would suggest upping his level to 7 or 8 and give him 2500 ATK (just a little more to show that he's the leader of the "Monarchs"). Keep the low defense so he's balanced(-ish) when applied to an Attribute-focused Aggro deck. OCG Fix:"When this card is [b']T[/b]ribute Summoned, declare 1 Attribute. This monster's Attribute becomes the selected Attribute. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, monsters with the selected Attribute gain 500 ATK." Your main problem is capitalizing. Clarification words (Attribute, Type, "Venom" Monsters, "Hero" Monsters, "Blackwing" Monsters) words are capitalized, as are the words "Deck" and "Hand". You should also only write "ATK points" as "ATK" -- because ATK is always calculated in points. Other things -- "The" is not capitalized in card names, unless it begins the name. So you should have "Grotle the Element Monarch". And that name sounds weird anyway... change "Element Monarch" to something more flashy -- like "Omnimonarch", "Final Monarch", "Greater Monarch", "Monarch of the End", or even just "Elemental Monarch" (because that just sounds better). And, finally, get rid of the LIMITED EDITION circulation. The card is only 1ST or LIMITED if it has a gold sticker, and you can't get a gold sticker unless you photoshop the picture. So, to keep it realistic, either get someone to photoshop that sticker for you, or take off the circulation. I LOVE the card picture, as well as the idea. In fact, I've made both a Spell & Trap Card for the Monarchs (I was thinking about making a set), and this guy would totally work as the cover card. :mrgreen: Thanks for the critique, ill edit it soon and bring it out as a level 8, it did seem OP. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Nah, it's not that OP. Don't change it to level 8. It's fine as it is. The 1st 1 suked. The 2nd 1 is actually pretty good for a new member. Some OCG errors and still unoriginal. 7.5/10 cause you're new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
red37s Posted October 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Eh, alright, need to continue make new work for practice eh? hehe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 "res37s" -- AWESOMESAUCE!! This card looks epic. Way to be! :mrgreen: Nah' date=' it's not that OP. Don't change it to level 8. It's fine as it is.[/quote'] Is a level 6 monster with 2900 ATK something you would consider "not that OP"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Nah' date=' it's not that OP. Don't change it to level 8. It's fine as it is.[/quote'] Is a level 6 monster with 2900 ATK something you would consider "not that OP"? It's 2400 ATK... If you count its effect it's still not OP since it's still just a beatstick. Also, I would consider the other monarchs still much better than this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Nah' date=' it's not that OP. Don't change it to level 8. It's fine as it is.[/quote'] Is a level 6 monster with 2900 ATK something you would consider "not that OP"? It's 2400 ATK... If you count its effect it's still not OP since it's still just a beatstick. Also, I would consider the other monarchs still much better than this. I would call this an overpowered beatstick. "Summoned Skull" has (I think) the highest ATK for a non-detrimental, single-tribute monster. And he's got 2500 ATK... 2900 is greater than 2500. By 400 points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
red37s Posted October 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Thanks You For Your Kindness! And Tips!Nah' date=' it's not that OP. Don't change it to level 8. It's fine as it is.[/quote'] Is a level 6 monster with 2900 ATK something you would consider "not that OP"? It's 2400 ATK... If you count its effect it's still not OP since it's still just a beatstick. Also, I would consider the other monarchs still much better than this. I would call this an overpowered beatstick. "Summoned Skull" has (I think) the highest ATK for a non-detrimental, single-tribute monster. And he's got 2500 ATK... 2900 is greater than 2500. By 400 points. Actually, A vanilla monster takes the high atk at 2600, frostosaures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 nice card. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 oh... nice sig... thanks. I feel smart now. :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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