My first card

[Cozmosus]

This is my first card, I don't usually post here, but I will this time:

[Alexis Rhodes]

ok effect and picture 7/10:)

[Cozmosus]

thanks!

[Spikeball]

like the pic^^

Some OCG-Errors, but I'm going to ignore it^^

9/10!!!

[Ghost Ryder]

Post the effect pl0x. Flying Machine? That's not even a real YGO type.

Picture is OK, there are OCG errors, 7.4/10.

[Jamuz Terebellum]

I really dont think he needs to post the effect out, i can read it o-o. About the card, really "Flying" is not a real type (Machine or Dragon would be better)

normal summoned = Normal Summoned

special summoned = Special Summoned

As the errors are only capitalization errors, it wont interfere in my judgment.

The pic is very good, i like it.

9/10

[ragnarok1945]

it's supposed to be Machine type, Flying machine isn't a real type

 

there's only very minor OCG errors, so it gets 8.6/10

[Master White]

Good, very good. Just get rid of the fake type and you should be set.

[Cozmosus]

It's not a fake type, it's Flying/Machine, which means 2 different types

[Jamuz Terebellum]

But i think a card cannot have 2 different Types, or can? You could just make this card be a Machine-Type and in the effect you could write:

"This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type monster" or something like that.

[nightmare drake]

OCG errors,good pic

8.9/10

[Master White]

It's not a fake type' date=' it's Flying/Machine, which means 2 different types

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But Flying is a Fake Type. Machine is another type but not a sub type here you have it placed.

In the effect, you could make it an dragon monster while in the above it could be a machine. or vise versa.

[lilm99]

XzY is right, in the effect write "this card is also treated as a machine type" and above make it say dragon or the other way around. but wait you alerady did:lol:, OCG error but nice 9.5/10

[Susie]

I don't think tuners are supposed to be that powerfull but oh well.

Mighty good pic and minor ocg.

For now I give a good 9/10.

Great for a first card since most people start out in the dumps.

[Master White]

Thank you and I'm sorry, I forgot to rate.

9.5/10

That is good for a new member.

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

if you want to make it flying/machine

call it a machine

and have its effect treat it as a Winged-Beast.

 

this is how the effect should look.

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When this card is Special Summoned, you can select 1 monster on the field. Remove the selected card and increase this card's ATK by an amount equal to half the selected card's ATK. While this card is face-up on the field, it is treated as a Dragon-Type monster.