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Jazin Kay

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First card is way OP'd. You also didn't specify which side of the field the monster that was destroyed would be special summoned. Moving cards from your graveyard to your deck isn't a bad thing in most cases. Zombie decks run fast due to special summoning so this card would deffinently give it to much power.

 

The second card's pic has to much white space, I know its ice but its just a little to bright. Instead of saying "set cards" I would say face-down cards instead. Set is a type of summoning.

 

Third card is OP'd without a set limit on how many cards you can remove, exspecially since it gives you a draw bonus too. I don't really like the image for this card.

 

I like the last card alot. Picture is awesome though it looks more like a fiend than a machine. I do think you should give him ATK equal to the number of monster cards instead of just cards. Just 6 cards would give this guy 3200 ATK. Midway through a tough duel where your opponent may have somewhere close to 20 cards in thier deck could give him 6000 ATK....Thats Ridic.

 

Ratings:

First card-9/10 for image and 6/10 for effect

Second card-3.5/10 for image and 7/10 for effect

Third card-1/10 for image and 6/10 for effect

Fourth card-10/10 for image and 7/10 for effect

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First card is way OP'd. You also didn't specify which side of the field the monster that was destroyed would be special summoned.

When a card you control simply says it Special Summons itself or something else and doesn't say which side of the field it will put it' date=' it's implying your side of the field. A clearer way I COULD have typed this is giving the player the OPTION to summon it by saying "you can Special Summon it", further implying it would be under your control.[/b']

 

The second card's pic has to much white space, I know its ice but its just a little to bright. Instead of saying "set cards" I would say face-down cards instead. Set is a type of summoning.

It's also a card placement. The text of Byser Shock proves this.

 

Third card is OP'd without a set limit on how many cards you can remove, exspecially since it gives you a draw bonus too. I don't really like the image for this card.

Balance, to me, came in the form of an effect that only occurs once, and only strikes face-up cards. It's draw effect is identical to that of Tethys, Goddess of Light.

 

I like the last card alot. Picture is awesome though it looks more like a fiend than a machine. I do think you should give him ATK equal to the number of monster cards instead of just cards. Just 6 cards would give this guy 3200 ATK. Midway through a tough duel where your opponent may have somewhere close to 20 cards in thier deck could give him 6000 ATK....Thats Ridic.

There are countless ways to destroy a monster. Big reason why Five-Headed Dragon sees little meta play, but he's a bit harder to summon, so eh. I allowed his ATK to fluctuate, so if a player could, they could defeat it by manipulating their own Graveyard. I also found the artist's name online. It's Daisuke Izuka.

 

Ratings:

First card-9/10 for image and 6/10 for effect

Second card-3.5/10 for image and 7/10 for effect

Third card-1/10 for image and 6/10 for effect

Fourth card-10/10 for image and 7/10 for effect

You are too kind.

 

 

And there are Synchro's' date=' that's no good.[/quote']

 

That is bad logic.

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