archnme Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 please tell me what you think, this was my first attempt at a good card. For every fire monster on the field increase the ATK points of this card by 100. If this card is destroyed pay 1000 life points to return this card to your hand instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcadiz Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Type of this card is Warrior not "Worrier" xDText needs to be edited:If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 1000 Life Points to return it to your hand instead. You should lower the LP you have to pay. I think 500 would be enough. Edit: Yeah it's a good card for a beginner xD thx Kivoxo I forgot to write that :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kivoxo Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Type of this card is Warrior not "Worrier" xDText needs to be edited:If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard' date=' you can pay 1000 Life Points to return it to your hand instead. You should lower the LP you have to pay. I think 500 would be enough.[/quote']^^ and pretty good for a first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 This card is pretty good for a newbie. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 It's a good and simple effect but the OCG is pretty bad. Overall, it's alright. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Very good for a newbie. except you don't need to pit ATK points. Just ATK is fine. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExtremeG Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 pretty good for a newbie. Keep working at it. Good pic and descent effect. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GunMetalDevil Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 pretty good. pic is good. effect is decent. some ocg errors but those were explained already. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archnme Posted November 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 im about to post a "burning" set (edited this card to fit in) so please go check that out and tell me what you think :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 worrier? Oo really good for a newb 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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