ShinyBlade Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 PLEASE LOCK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dismal Euphony Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 Official Poem Thread says hi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 You are smarter then a computer, this is not very good. Also POEM THREAD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyBlade Posted November 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 so Do I need any fixed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 worries = worried. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyBlade Posted November 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 thank allot anything else? Please be honest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathghost101 Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 honestly it its not half bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyBlade Posted November 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 thank for your comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathghost101 Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 no problem dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyBlade Posted November 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Any other mistake or anything that need to improve? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyBlade Posted November 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 Hi Poem. My name is O. Ficial Poe-Trythread. Pleased to meet you. I enjoyed reading it, but it wasn't special. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jinzo Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 Wrong place and poem is meh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyBlade Posted November 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 thank is there anyway to improve it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 thank is there anyway to improve it? Will you ever understand that this poem should be in the Official Poetry Thread? Seriously, it's been said like 3 times, and all you can say in response is "thank is there anyway to improve it?". Just go post this in the Official Poetry thread and get a mod to lock this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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