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[spoiler=note]I'll give a rep if you find me beter pics or fully corect my OCG

 

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[spoiler=Ebony]untitled-9.jpg

 

 

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Wanderly for BG

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Hunter: When this card is Normal or Special Summoned you can this cards ATK points by 500 to Special Summon 1 "Battle Spider Shadow" from your hand or Deck to your sde of the field during your next Standby Phase.

 

Corona: While you have at least 1 "Battle Spider" face-up on your side of the field during your Standby Phase you can activate this cards effect, toss a coin.

- Heads: Increase your Life Points by 500.

- Tails: You skip your Battle Phase this turn.

 

Thought Corona's different effect was better and up'd her Life Point increase as 100 is far to small for a coin toss, as its not a certain like some card effects. If you wanna keep your effect its Fairy-Type you need capitals player. For your Spiders as they are Union Monsters (Which is a good idea) you may wanna read a union monster your missing alot of text off your card. Go here this is the one stop shop for info on Yu-Gi-Oh most people go here:

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Union_Monsters

Hope the rewrite and the info helps and yeah Ive seen this aint a bad show, I think that prince lumin is funny always laying about and yawning!! Keep em coming 8.5/10

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Yeah I noticed how hunters card background looked like Dark Magician...If my mate Spell Master knew you was stealing DM's background he'd hunt you down...he its nuts about that card lol!! This is good we have both watched the show but have no idea what they bad guys are called...derrrrrr!! I remember one bad guy with a broken horn on his head, he had a sword abit like Cloud Strife in FF7.

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Lumus: Increase the ATK points of this card by the number of cards played during your opponent's turn x100. During the End Phase of the turn this cards ATK points are 2500 or higher send it to the Graveyard.

 

I think the increase is a good idea but maybe lower its starting ATK points of even lower the cap on the ATK point limit as there is no neg for playing him and he reaches 2500 which is about the highest Lvl 6 cards get up to.

 

Ebony: Like the first 2 you havent included any of the text required for a Union monster but it can be long and very boring to put in so I can understand you skippin it lol. But as before the spiders effect is too powerful for the fact it really has no neg for having it on the field. Also you may wanna add what Phase you skip, dont forget the forbidden list was invented because of cards that skipped phases so your playing with fire as such.

 

The 2 new cards are the same standard as the others good names nice pics and creative efects, just be careful you dont run away with the power of the cards 8/10 for the new ones keep going this is a good set.

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