marioman64 Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Now presenting...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 In my opinion, it's not so cool. Here's why:-Type-wise, it would be more creative if it had a real Type instead of an unoriginal one. I suggest it being a Reptile-Type. Also, if it's a Spirit Monster, it should have the traditional effect of it being returned to your hand after being Summoned.-It is too overpowered. Summoning something so easily that has 4000 ATK is pretty powerful. It should either have Summoning Conditions or its ATK and DEF being 800 points lower to make it fair.-The effect, on the other hand is underpowered. It being only 500 points is a small cost. Overall, it is okay for a first card. You just need to make certain changes to it to make it fair. 5/10. If you need more help, you can PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 This is a not-so-great card b/c 1) No real type. Try to give a Type that fits, like Reptile for example2) If it's a Spirit Monster, it needs the traditional "return to hand" effect, like Starly said3) OCG needs some work."When this card is Summoned, you lose 500 Life Points." Overall, it's okay for a newbie, but I'm giving you a 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stoopid1 Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 My theory of forum relativity continues to prove itself true. Because you said it was a good card in the title of the thread, I already knew that it wasn't a good card before I even looked at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agaming Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 In my opinion' date=' it's not so cool. Here's why:-Type-wise, it would be more creative if it had a real Type instead of an unoriginal one. I suggest it being a Reptile-Type. Also, if it's a Spirit Monster, it should have the traditional effect of it being returned to your hand after being Summoned.-It is too overpowered. Summoning something so easily that has 4000 ATK is pretty powerful. It should either have Summoning Conditions or its ATK and DEF being 800 points lower to make it fair.-The effect, on the other hand is underpowered. It being only 500 points is a small cost. Overall, it is okay for a first card. You just need to make certain changes to it to make it fair. 5/10. If you need more help, you can PM me.[/quote']agreedThis is a not-so-great card b/c 1) No real type. Try to give a Type that fits' date=' like Reptile for example2) If it's a Spirit Monster, it needs the traditional "return to hand" effect, like Starly said3) OCG needs some work."When this card is Summoned, you lose 500 Life Points." Overall, it's okay for a newbie, but I'm giving you a 5.5/10[/quote']also agreed My theory of forum relativity continues to prove itself true. Because you said it was a good card in the title of the thread' date=' I already knew that it wasn't a good card before I even looked at it.[/quote'] thats harsh but sadly true Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ĎλЯклξššζ Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 In my opinion' date=' it's not so cool. Here's why:-Type-wise, it would be more creative if it had a real Type instead of an unoriginal one. I suggest it being a Reptile-Type. Also, if it's a Spirit Monster, it should have the traditional effect of it being returned to your hand after being Summoned.-It is too overpowered. Summoning something so easily that has 4000 ATK is pretty powerful. It should either have Summoning Conditions or its ATK and DEF being 800 points lower to make it fair.-The effect, on the other hand is underpowered. It being only 500 points is a small cost. Overall, it is okay for a first card. You just need to make certain changes to it to make it fair. 5/10. If you need more help, you can PM me.[/quote']This........... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Errr... Too queer to rate and comment. Don't mind Fake Types, so 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midnight111 Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 It isn't a great card. 5.5/10, same problems the others have said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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