Nikkiboy029 Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 well i haven't posted in the showcase section in a while so thought id show my new moth monster(i censored it, cause some people might find it offensive?)[spoiler=Spiritless Moth Dread version 1] [spoiler=version2] Which version do you like betterversion 1 is the originalversion2 is the one i fixed with advice from here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Nice except for his right arm (our right). Looks like he's leaning on a table or something. Oh and putting a face where his "thing" is meant to do is kind of a fail censor .... I think you understand why. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted November 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 lol the censor was meant to be a fail one(more of a lolz) thanks he's shooting an energy ball from that arm......... so i guess i know what you mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 If he's meant to be shooting an energy ball, I reccomend you move the ball towards his hand. It's too distant from the hand, I thought it was just part of the background :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 That, and the fact that it's shining over the hand. The mohawk looks a bit off, but maybe the head is bigger than I'm seeing it. The skin look really red, too. :? Nice drawing, though; I really like it. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 lol, love the censor xDmay i ask how u did the energy ball thing in his hand?it looks very proffessional in my opinion,nice ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted November 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 lol' date=' love the censor xDmay i ask how u did the energy ball thing in his hand?it looks very proffessional in my opinion,nice ^_^[/quote'] lol lets just say the dodge tool helped a bit :D so does he look proportionate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 I think I'll give some constructive critisism ;D -The upper part of the arm with the energy ball is shorter than the other arm's even though it is a little closer.-The haircut (like Fuzzie said) is a little sideways. ^-^" I think it would be cool if the arm with the energy ball was pointing to the front up-closer or with the fingers closing in around the ball xD Still, nice drawing :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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