♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 [align=center]Hope you Enjoy ^^! When this card is Normal Summoned while your opponent controls 2 or more DARK monsters, this card gains 300 ATK. When this card would be destroyed by a DARK monster, you can discard 2 cards from your hand instead. When this card attacks a DARK monster you gain 500 Life Points. <(^^)> Hug it if ya Love It![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 I LOVE THIS PIC!! I wonder where Wanderley found this image xD^^slightly UP, it's ATK is too low i think. OCG is fine.9,9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Thanks ^^. Well I made it's ATK 1900 because it gains 300 ATK when summoned while your opponent controls 2 DARK monsters which makes it's ATK 2200 if I made it higher then it would end up with 2300 or 2400 which would OP it due to its other effects. But thanky :3 I'll see what others say before changing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Summon = Summoned. Only error I could find. Great job as always. <(^-^)> 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 :3 ty ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Läufer Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 -Add "-ed" after "Normal Summon."-Delete "instead" and put "to negate the attack." It's kinda OVP'd, but ATK and DEF balanced it. <(^^)> 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragonknight315 Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome card!!! It is perfectly balanced! Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Oh well seems like all other think it's balanced^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 -Delete "instead" and put "to negate the attack." It's kinda OVP'd' date=' but ATK and DEF balanced it.[/u'] To explain the bold. That would change the effect. Negating the attack would mean that no damage is taken. Putting the instead in place means the card is still attacked by it isnt destroyed. Its a drawback version of "This card cannot be destroyed by battle". Mind hinting why it's OP? :3 Then I can patch it up. thanks for the rates BTW ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 The pic looks more of a Machine-type or Fairy-type.Anyway, I still like it. 10/10. (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Läufer Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 It's not really OVP'd according to the ATK and DEF you put. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Oh. Well if you really think its OP I wanna hear why so I can get an opinion that way if anyone else agrees I can change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Its not overpowered. Even if it started at 2000 ATK and gained 500 ATK instead, it wouldn't be overpowered. Just good.The protection effect is too expensive (2 cards). It'll drain your hand in no time and with that ATK (even increased by its effect), there will be a handful of monsters wanting to attack it.As for the OCG, I think all your "when" should be "if" instead. That's about it. I like this card xD (pic is too 3D for my taste but I can't deny its good ;) ) and it has an epic DEF lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 hopefully the ones I made for you back then still have had influence on the cards you make today, LLD Now, as for the effect, in your 2nd sentence you forgot to say that by discarding those two cards, this card is not destroyed by a DARK monster The only REAL weakness is still a lack of a slight drawback, which makes it OPed 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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