NeriesUmbra Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 [align=center]No idea were this one came from lol but plz rate and any OCG fix will be appreciated. effect Tribute this card to select 3 non-Monster Cards and 2 Monster Cards from your Deck. Your opponent must randomly select 1 of those cards. If the selected card is a monster, you can Special Summon it, ignoring the Summoning conditions. If it is not a monster, discard it. After the card has been selected, return all other cards to the Deck. If this card is destroyed by battle, add 1 Level 3 monster from your Deck to your hand. Bit long lol. (Thats what she said emphasis on lol T.T) Here is the 5th card I ever made lol effect When this card is discarded from your Hand or deck Special Summon to your side of the field 1 "Wiked token" (Fiend-Type/Dark/Level3/ATK1000/DEF1000).[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Did you mean to type "Architect"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 ty my spellings crap I'll change that soon but what did you think of the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Makes wonders with Ojamagic, and that trap that Special Summons Speed Warrior. Although I think it has better uses.1 out of 5 is somewhat hard to pull. xD 4 would make it more fair for the user. in my opinion 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 I was just trying not to make it op lol but ty might just do that just this card has the abiloty to summon stuff like judgment dragon and ancient gear golem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baltoli Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 It's all right, but the effect is just a bit simialr to painful choice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 It's a good card, but has some OCG errors. Like the effect, seems a little boring though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 OCG needs work but effect is awsome...9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Effect reminds meh of "A Hero Emerges"/"Painful Choice" crossed together. OCG is okay, but the pic is kind of bad. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 OCG needs a bit of work, but aside from that, I like the effect, and the pic. 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Since you all see ocg errors could you plz tell me what they are so I can fix them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 I didn't say OCG errors but okay xD Tribute this card to select 4 non-Monster Cards and 1 Monster Card from your Deck. Your opponent must randomly select 1 of those cards. If the selected card is a monster, you can Special Summon it, ignoring the Summoning conditions. If it is not a monster, discard it. After the card has been selected, return all other cards to the Deck. If this card is destroyed by battle, add 1 Level 3 monster from your Deck to your hand. look for capitalization errors and how to eliminate unnessesary excess of writting based on that^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Hm...1 of 5 chance of eventually OTKing your opponent...seems underpowered to me, 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uskaks Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 I didn't say OCG errors but okay xD Tribute this card to select 4 non-Monster Cards and 1 Monster Card from your Deck. Your opponent must randomly select 1 of those cards. If the selected card is a monster' date=' you can Special Summon it, ignoring the Summoning conditions. [b'](Summoning = summoning)[/b] If it is not a monster, discard it. After the card has been selected, return all other cards to the Deck. If this card is destroyed (as a result of) battle, add 1 Level 3 monster from your Deck to your hand. look for capitalization errors and how to eliminate unnessesary excess of writting based on that^ Two little fixes there. Looks good. I think you mean Architect, but Arcuteq is actually kinda cool lookin' :D 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 the Type should also be 'Spellcaster / Effect', and his chance is too low for him to be effective. I'd make it the monster-S/T ratio a 1-3 (~33%) or 2-5 (40%). 20% is just too low for it to be useful... Also, make the last bit like this: 'When this card is destroyed by battle, you can add 1 Level 3 or lower monster from your Deck to your hand.' (so you can add copies of him to your hand, as well as other useful tuners) Annnnd make him level 2 or 3. With a little more ATK and DEF (oh! You could make the ATK-to-DEF ratio the same as the monster-to-S/T ratio. Like 100 ATK to 500 DEF.) Warm Regards,:mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tentacruel Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 I agree, change the ratio and it'll be much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 kk changing as we speak but will not change to 3 or below cus then it can be used for exodia that would be ban or limited like sangan. ty you all, sleepy sorry if I offended you I just got a lil annoyed at people saying OCG errors but specifying were seams like they were just saying it for the sake of saying and that dose not help lol ty again for ocg fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 I didn't say OCG errors but okay xD Tribute this card to select 4 non-Monster Cards and 1 Monster Card from your Deck. Your opponent must randomly select 1 of those cards. If the selected card is a monster' date=' you can Special Summon it, ignoring the Summoning conditions. [b'](Summoning = summoning)[/b] If it is not a monster, discard it. After the card has been selected, return all other cards to the Deck. If this card is destroyed (as a result of) battle, add 1 Level 3 monster from your Deck to your hand. look for capitalization errors and how to eliminate unnessesary excess of writting based on that^ Two little fixes there. Looks good. I think you mean Architect, but Arcuteq is actually kinda cool lookin' :D 9/10 This card says that you are wrong in the "summoning" part[spoiler=Here:] And By battle = As a reasult of battle. Its just that "by battle" is newer OCG. Look at this card.[spoiler=Here:] so.... you are wrong there :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 You go girl oh and fixed I think lol what you think to the edit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Wiked Idole's effect right now is boring, you should give it another one for the first card, I'd put a level limit on the first effect so it will be balanced out more 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Early Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Almishal Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 OCG Help for Wicked Idole ( I hope I'm correct in the spelling unless you pressed "e" by accident >.> )[spoiler=OCG?]Wicked IdoleWhen this card is discarded from your Hand or Deck, Special Summon 1 "Wicked Idole Token"to your side of the field (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level3/ATK1000/DEF1000). Question: Wicked Idole only? or exactly Wicked Token? ~ Almishal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 My spelling sucks even spell checker gets confused with some of my spellings lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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