Crusard Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 My first two cards from my ALF series pack.Oops, I forgot to post the cards.I have been working on some other cards so here they are.Is anybody out there? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny19297 Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 OCG mistakes and people dont like non Anime cards (Well most people dont!!) 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crusard Posted December 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 Ok. Thanks for your replies.ALF rules.I have a question: Give me an example of a correct OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 chocolate pie: As long as this card is face-up on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of every monster with "ALF" in its name by 600 and decrease the ATK and DEF of every non-ALF monster by 400. ur welcome to PM me whenevr u need help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 @FusionXD: Every=Each @ these cards: They're stupid. I don't like them. Your OCG is way off. FusionXD helped a little..but on a stupid card. Chocolate Pie...really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lileezyejr Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 Those cards kinda of sucked hard the ocg was bad and the cards were really stupid.Id give this about 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crusard Posted December 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 I know that the OCG is wrong but I am new so please don´t insult the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 um, they have every right to not like them. Just cause you're new to the site doesn't mean you're new to ygo. I like ALF though. A lot of OCG errors. A lot of OCG errors. Can you make a card of lucky? "Tribute this monster. Increase the attack of "ALF" by 1000 untill the end phase of this turn." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crusard Posted December 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 Just say "I don´t like the cards". Don´t say "This cards are stupid". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crusard Posted December 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 My last ALF card is: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 Fine. I won't say "This cards are stupid."However,These cards are stupid.The effect of Press Conference doesn't make any sense either.The proper effect would be:"You gain 1000 Life Points during each Standby Phase" since it's a continuos Trap Card. Even then with the Perfect OCG, it would still be terribly OVpd. L2ocg&playygob4upstcrds Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crusard Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 I forgot to eliminate the continous card icon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Well, I, for one, actually appreciate non-anime cards GREATLY. (Check out my Big Lebowski cards if you have the time.) I would greatly suggest listening to FusionXD. Whoever he or she is, he/she knows the official card grammar pretty well. Send him/her a private message to get your OCG fixed--you'll get much more respect with good OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crusard Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Thanks for your advices Jaeger. You and FusionXD are the only members who have posted positive replies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 u have PMing disabled btw, so im posting the correct OCG here ALF's Friend-When this monster is Summoned, you may Special Summon up to 3 "ALF" monsters (you have to specify where theyr being summoned from, so il just say deck, if u want Graveyard or whatever, just replace deck wit it) from your Deck or inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. for alfs friend, its kinda OPed since ALF is a 5 star, so i think itd be even if u made it to just summon 1 alf from the deck or graveyard or w/e spaceship-If this card is equipped to an "ALF" monster, increase that monster's ATK and DEF by 700 points. ordering a pizza-This card can only be activated when you have a face-up "ALF" and face-up "ALF's Friend - Willie" on the field. Tribute 1 "ALF's Friend - Willie" and pay 1000 Life Points. As long as "ALF" is face-up on the field, inflict 500 points of damage to the opponent during each of their Standby Phases." one thing to remember, capitalize every word in a card name, so itd be Ordering A Pizza, ALF's Friend - Willie, u get the idea. hope this helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 that last sentence i wrote, dont capitalize words like of or the, so those type of words u dnt capitalize, sorry about that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crusard Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Thank you FusionXD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 ALF's Spaceship is pointless. Even Axe of Despair is better. >__> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crusard Posted December 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2009 ALF's Spaceship is pointless. Even Axe of Despair is better. >__>Let´s see if you can make it better than this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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