Some ALF cards.

[Crusard]

My first two cards from my ALF series pack.

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Oops, I forgot to post the cards.

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I have been working on some other cards so here they are.

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Is anybody out there?

[Guest Neo Fusion]

OCG

[Danny19297]

OCG mistakes and people dont like non Anime cards (Well most people dont!!)

 

5/10

[Crusard]

Ok. Thanks for your replies.

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ALF rules.

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I have a question:

 

Give me an example of a correct OCG.

[Guest Neo Fusion]

chocolate pie: As long as this card is face-up on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of every monster with "ALF" in its name by 600 and decrease the ATK and DEF of every non-ALF monster by 400.

 

ur welcome to PM me whenevr u need help

[Mr. Hyde]

@FusionXD: Every=Each

@ these cards: They're stupid. I don't like them. Your OCG is way off. FusionXD helped a little..but on a stupid card. Chocolate Pie...really.

[lileezyejr]

Those cards kinda of sucked hard the ocg was bad and the cards were really stupid.Id give this about 3/10

[Crusard]

I know that the OCG is wrong but I am new so please don´t insult the cards.

[Aero~]

um, they have every right to not like them. Just cause you're new to the site doesn't mean you're new to ygo. I like ALF though. A lot of OCG errors. A lot of OCG errors. Can you make a card of lucky? "Tribute this monster. Increase the attack of "ALF" by 1000 untill the end phase of this turn."

[Crusard]

Just say "I don´t like the cards". Don´t say "This cards are stupid".

[Crusard]

My last ALF card is:

[Mr. Hyde]

Fine. I won't say "This cards are stupid."

However,

These cards are stupid.

The effect of Press Conference doesn't make any sense either.

The proper effect would be:

"You gain 1000 Life Points during each Standby Phase" since it's a continuos Trap Card. Even then with the Perfect OCG, it would still be terribly OVpd. L2ocg&playygob4upstcrds

[Crusard]

I forgot to eliminate the continous card icon.

[Stan Alda]

Well, I, for one, actually appreciate non-anime cards GREATLY. (Check out my Big Lebowski cards if you have the time.) I would greatly suggest listening to FusionXD. Whoever he or she is, he/she knows the official card grammar pretty well. Send him/her a private message to get your OCG fixed--you'll get much more respect with good OCG.

[Crusard]

Thanks for your advices Jaeger. You and FusionXD are the only members who have posted positive replies.

[Guest Neo Fusion]

u have PMing disabled btw, so im posting the correct OCG here

 

ALF's Friend-When this monster is Summoned, you may Special Summon up to 3 "ALF" monsters (you have to specify where theyr being summoned from, so il just say deck, if u want Graveyard or whatever, just replace deck wit it) from your Deck or inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent.

 

for alfs friend, its kinda OPed since ALF is a 5 star, so i think itd be even if u made it to just summon 1 alf from the deck or graveyard or w/e

 

spaceship-If this card is equipped to an "ALF" monster, increase that monster's ATK and DEF by 700 points.

 

ordering a pizza-This card can only be activated when you have a face-up "ALF" and face-up "ALF's Friend - Willie" on the field. Tribute 1 "ALF's Friend - Willie" and pay 1000 Life Points. As long as "ALF" is face-up on the field, inflict 500 points of damage to the opponent during each of their Standby Phases."

 

one thing to remember, capitalize every word in a card name, so itd be Ordering A Pizza, ALF's Friend - Willie, u get the idea. hope this helps

[Guest Neo Fusion]

that last sentence i wrote, dont capitalize words like of or the, so those type of words u dnt capitalize, sorry about that

[Crusard]

Thank you FusionXD.

[byak]

ALF's Spaceship is pointless. Even Axe of Despair is better. >__>

[Crusard]

ALF's Spaceship is pointless. Even Axe of Despair is better. >__>

Let´s see if you can make it better than this.