roperl Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 when posting critisism would you mind explaining how i could improve it as well id appreciate it This ones new i think its a bit dogey whats your opinions on improving ithelp this one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
weexzk Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 I think insectosaurus and ginormica are a bit to powerful. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 Yes the odds of your opponent having a LIGHT Attribute monster is not really likeable, so thus over powered.But once you've summoned it your opponent might have 1 LIGHT Attribute. OP'ed in a way.Ginormica OP'ed again.OCG errors but I see what your getting at5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Susie Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 Insectosaurus extremly overpowered.Ginormica not too overpowered but it still is overpowered.and the missing link should say:"If there are no monsters with less ATK tan this card then it can attack your opponent's life points directly."or something like thatI give 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roperl Posted December 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 thankyou for your comments i shall use them to improve my next set, however my spelling is a bit off so ill fix that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 Compare your cards with other sets heres my set:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-175511.html My Offical Card Grammar is great so you could inspire to it but dont just copy off me! Try and improvise with something like that try to do that in your own way thats how I became a great Card Maker. Oh and you can comment rate I dont really care. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roperl Posted December 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 Insectosaurus extremly overpowered.Ginormica not too overpowered but it still is overpowered.and the missing link should say:"If there are no monsters with less ATK tan this card then it can attack your opponent's life points directly."or something like thatI give 7/10 Im going to argue against ginormica being over powered as the elemental heros series contained sky scraper which boosts their attack by 1000 when attacking a stronger monster which is basically what i used' date=' admitadly most elemental heros arnt that tough but the fusions are, and its very easy to fuse a couple of elemental heros so i still stand by ginormicas abillity[hr']there i changed insectosaurus, tell me if she's better or worse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Yes the odds of your opponent having a LIGHT Attribute monster is not really likeable' date=' so thus over powered.But once you've summoned it your opponent might have 1 LIGHT Attribute. OP'ed in a way.Ginormica OP'ed again.OCG errors but I see what your getting at5/10[/quote'] I agree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roperl Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 right there all up dated tell me if its better or even worse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 Basically better than your previous ones. 8/10About time someone makes these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roperl Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 Basically better than your previous ones. 8/10About time someone makes these. what do you mean makes these do you mean cards from the film ive made more but their work in progress Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Susie Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 The pumpkin one has minor ocg.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roperl Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 The pumpkin one has minor ocg.8/10 ok where bouts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
disastermaster2000 Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 link needs background.you spelled until wrong.need period at end.comma should be period, t turns into T. fix all those I'd give you a 9.5/10 cuz' they're a bit op'd.Right now, i'd give you a 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roperl Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 link needs background.you spelled until wrong.need period at end.comma should be period' date=' t turns into T. fix all those I'd give you a 9.5/10 cuz' they're a bit op'd.Right now, i'd give you a 8/10.[/quote'] Sorry not familar with the language quite yet whats a period? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Beatiful beautiful, a tad btter Offical Card Grammar (OCG) and Background (BG), I se what your getting at.6/10. Nice.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roperl Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Butterflysaurus, I think ive gone a bit too far with this comments on approval, insults are fine but tell me why your insulting me please thankyou Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roperl Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Butterflysaurus' date=' I think ive gone a bit too far with this comments on approval, insults are fine but tell me why your insulting me please thankyou[/quote'] another card means more insults tell me what you think and why you hate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roperl Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 galaxar added how can i improve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roperl Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 new card, spells need help any advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kiba~ Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 weird but the movie was good 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roperl Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 weird but the movie was good 10/10 any advice on improvements? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roperl Posted December 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 new card added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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