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Best Card: I've made so many... (written cards, that is.) My favorites:

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Legendary Pastry Master

EARTH

Spellcaster/Effect

5/2300/1200

"Baking Stage" Continuous Spell Cards cannot be removed from the field, except by their own effect. If this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, add a "Mystic Cake Mix", "Acidic Vegetable Oil", "Berserk Eggmen", "Butter Nutter", "Sugar Bomb" or "Flour Screen" from your Deck to your hand.

 

Baker of Greed

DARK

Fiend/Effect

4/1600/300

"Baking Stage" Continuous Spell Cards cannot be destroyed by card effects. Each time a monster(s) you control is destroyed and removed from play while a "Baking Stage" Continuous Spell Card is on the field, draw a card.

 

The Baker's Apprentice

LIGHT

Spellcaster/Tuner

2/1000/1000

If you control a "Baker" monster (except "The Baker's Apprentice"), you can Special Summon this card from your hand.

 

Baker of Heaven: Martonk of the Icing

LIGHT

Spellcaster/Synchro

6/2500/2000

"The Baker's Apprentice" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned, and you control a "Baking Stage" Continuous Spell Card, gain 1000 Life Points. "Baking Stage" Continuous Spell Cards cannot be removed from the field, except by their own effect. If this card is removed from the field, Special Summon a non-Synchro "Baker" monster from your Graveyard.

 

Food Runner

EARTH

Warrior

3/500/500

This card cannot be removed from the field during the Battle Phase. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. When this card deals Battle Damage, add a "Mystic Cake Mix", "Acidic Vegetable Oil", "Berserk Eggmen", "Butter Nutter", "Sugar Bomb" or "Flour Screen" from your Deck to your hand.

 

Mystic Cake Mix

EARTH

Beast-Warrior/Effect

2/400/2000

If you control a "Baking Stage 1: The Mighty Mixing Bowl", this card is removed from play when it is destroyed. If this card is removed from the field aside from being destroyed, Special Summon 2 "Powder Tokens" (Fairy-Type/EARTH/Level 2/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position. They cannot be Tributed, except for the Tribute Summon of a "Cake" monster.

 

Acidic Vegetable Oil

Normal Spell

If you control a "Baking Stage" Continuous Spell Card, this card is removed from play when it is sent to the Graveyard. Change the Battle Position of 1 monster your opponent controls and decrease its ATK to 0.

 

Berserk Eggmen

LIGHT

Warrior/Effect

4/1500/0

If you control a "Baking Stage 1: The Mighty Mixing Bowl", this card is removed from play when it is destroyed. When this card is Summoned, put 3 "Shell Counters" on it. When a card effect would destroy this card or a "Baking Stage" Continuous Spell Card, removed a Shell Counter instead.

 

Butter Nutter

LIGHT

Spellcaster/Effect

4/600/1900

If you control a "Baking Stage 1: The Mighty Mixing Bowl", this card is removed from play when it is destroyed. If this card is removed from play by battle, select 1 monster your opponent controls and put 4 Butter Counters on it. As long as a Butter Counter is on a monster, that monster loses 300 ATK for each Butter Counter it has. In addition, each time a monster with a Butter Counter battles, remove a Butter Counter from it after Damage Calculation.

 

Sugar Bomb

Normal Trap

If you control a "Baking Stage 1: The Mighty Mixing Bowl", this card is removed from play when it is sent to the Graveyard. You can only activate this card if you control a "Baking Stage" Continuous Spell Card or a "Baker" monster, and your opponent declares an attack. Destroy all Attack Position monsters on your opponent's side of the field.

 

Flour Screen

Quick-play Spell

If you control a "Baking Stage 1: The Mighty Mixing Bowl", this card is removed from play when it is sent to the Graveyard. All face-up monsters change their Battle Positions, and Continuous Spell Cards cannot be removed from the field this turn.

 

Pastry Parley

You can only activate this card while you control a "Baking Stage" Continuous Spell Card. Both players skip their next Battle Phases.

 

Automatic Icing Cannon

Counter Trap

You can only activate this card if you control a "Baking Stage" Continuous Spell Card. Negate the Summon of a monster(s) and destroy it.

 

Baking Stage 1: The Mighty Mixing Bowl

Continuous Spell

If a card is removed from play with its own effect, gain 700 Life Points. If "Mystic Cake Mix", "Acidic Vegetable Oil", "Berserk Eggmen", "Butter Nutter", "Sugar Bomb" and "Flour Screen" are all removed from play, you can send this card to the Graveyard and activate 1 "Baking Stage 2: Inferno Oven" from your hand or Deck.

 

Baking Stage 2: Inferno Oven

Continuous Spell

This card can only be activated by the effect of "Baking Stage 1: The Mighty Mixing Bowl". During each Standby Phase, that turn's player takes 500 damage. During each of your Standby Phases, put 1 Heat Counter on this card (max 4). You can send this card with 4 Heat Counters on it to the Graveyard to activate 1 "Baking Stage 3: Cooling Period" from your hand or Deck.

 

Baking Stage 3: Cooling Period

Continuous Spell

You can only activate this card by the effect of "Baking Stage 2: Inferno Oven". During the second Standby Phase after activation of this card, send this card to the Graveyard to activate 1 "Baking Stage 4: Serving the Dish" from your Deck.

 

Baking Stage 4: Serving

Quick-play Spell

You can only activate this card by the effect of "Baking Stage 3: Cooling Period". This card's activation and effect cannot be negated, and it cannot be destroyed. You win the game.

 

Salvagable Ingredients

Normal Spell

Select 1 each of your removed from play "Mystic Cake Mix", "Acidic Vegetable Oil", "Berserk Eggmen", "Butter Nutter", "Sugar Bomb" and/or "Flour Screen". Return the selected cards to your Deck.

 

 

Do you have YVD? If so what is your username: I'm getting it right now, and I'll get back to you on that.

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Reborn Hero - Night Zephyr(RBH - EN 010)

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This card is also treated as a Spellcaster-Type monster. During your Main Phase, you can remove this card from play, if you do, during your next Standby Phase, Special Summon this card. When this card is Special Summoned by it's own effect, return 2 cards on the field to their owner's hands.

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"This card is also treated as a Spellcaster-Type. During your Main Phase, you can remove this card from play, if you do, during your next Standby Phase, Special Summon this card. When this card is Special Summoned by it's own effect, return 2 cards on the field to their owner's hands."

OCG really good, me gusta But I don't really liked the picture: 8/10

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play all cards in your Graveyard. When this card is Successfully Summoned' date=' send [b']all cards in[/b] your Deck to the Graveyard. This card gains 200 ATK for every each card in your Graveyard (max. 3400). While this card is face-u on the field, You cannot draw a card during conduct normal draws in your Draw Phase. This card cannot be destroyed by Trap Cards. Once per turn, you can remove from play 2 cards in from your Graveyard to activate 1 of the following effects: - Increase the ATK of all other Monster's you control by 600 until the End Phase. ●: Face-up monsters you control gain 600 ATK until the End Phase. - Increase your Life Points by 1200. ●: Gain 1200 Life Points. - Place 1 "Chaos Counter" on this card. ●Place 1 Chaos Counter on this card. A monster with a Chaos Counter on it cannot be destroyed by the effect of a Spell Card. During the 2nd Standby Phase after this effect was activated, remove all Chaos Counters from this card. Once per turn, you can equip this card to a monster OR unequip it to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster gains 2400 ATK. When the equipped monster destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, remove from play 1 card on the field. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, you can remove from play 5 cards in your Graveyard instead.

 

Most of your errors came from capitalizing things that shouldn't be capitalized, like "face-up", "max.", and "monster". Monster is capitalized when it's used to refer to a specific type of monster, like a "Ritual Monster", "Effect Monster", "Normal Monster", "Synchro Monster", etc.

 

Other stuff was just basically tricky trivial stuff, like "-" being "●", "successfully" being obsolete, "increase" being made into "gain" for ATK and Life Points, "drawing during your Draw Phase" being "conducting your normal draw in your Draw Phase" (as seen on Dark General Freed), Counters like Chaos Counters not needing quotation marks, etc.

 

Here's the fixed effect by the way without strikes and whatnot:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play all cards in your Graveyard. When this card is Successfully Summoned, send all cards in your Deck to the Graveyard. This card gains 200 ATK for every each card in your Graveyard (max. 3400). While this card is face-u on the field, You cannot draw a card during conduct normal draws in your Draw Phase. This card cannot be destroyed by Trap Cards. Once per turn, you can remove from play 2 cards in from your Graveyard to activate 1 of the following effects: ●: Face-up monsters you control gain 600 ATK until the End Phase. ●: Gain 1200 Life Points. ●Place 1 Chaos Counter on this card. A monster with a Chaos Counter on it cannot be destroyed by the effect of a Spell Card. During the 2nd Standby Phase after this effect was activated, destroy all Chaos Counters on this card. Once per turn, you can equip this card to a monster OR unequip it to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster gains 2400 ATK. When the equipped monster destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, remove from play 1 card on the field. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, you can remove from play 5 cards in your Graveyard instead.

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Ah' date=' we just need 1 card as example, also, post the card, not the card as a written one, unless you are one of these members that keep on the Written Card Section. I'll never understand th[b']ose[/b] members.

 

I am indeed one of "those members". It's ten thousand times easier to make written cards for me for two simple reasons:

1) I am terrible at hunting pictures.

2) You have a MUCH larger spectrum if you don't worry about the picture.

 

But if you insist...

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Blessings of the Light". When this card battles a DARK monster' date=' halve that monster's ATK. This card cannot attack or be attacked by an "Elemental Dragon" monster. If this card is removed from the field, destroy all non-LIGHT cards on the field and Special Summon "Elemental Dragon: Deivara, The Dragon of Light" from your Graveyard. Its effect is negated and its ATK is halved.[/quote']

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing all cards in your Graveyard from play. When this card is Summoned' date=' send all cards in your Deck to the Graveyard. This card gains 200 ATK for each card in your Graveyard (max. 3400). You cannot conduct normal draws in your Draw Phase. This card cannot be destroyed by Trap Cards. Once per turn, you can remove from play 2 cards from your Graveyard to activate 1 of the following effects: ●: Face-up monsters you control gain 600 ATK until the End Phase. ●: Gain 1200 Life Points. ●Place 1 Chaos Counter on this card. A monster with a Chaos Counter on it cannot be destroyed by the effect of a Spell Card. During the 2nd Standby Phase after this effect was activated, [b']remove[/b] all Chaos Counters from this card. Once per turn, you can equip this card to a monster OR unequip it to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster gains 2400 ATK. When the equipped monster destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, remove 1 card on the field from play. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, you can remove 5 cards in your Graveyard from play instead.

 

Counters are removed from monsters, not destroyed, and RFP goes "remove [number of cards] in [location] from play".

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And here is one of my newest cards:

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This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 3 Winged Beast-Type monsters you control (This card cannot be Set). This card's original ATK becomes the sum of the respective ATK of the Tributes. This card cannot attack in the turn it is Summoned. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can remove from play 1 card from your hand, field or Graveyard to increases this card's DEF by 750. When this card's DEF is 3750 or higher, this card can attack your opponent directly. This card is unaffected by Monster, Spell and Trap Card Effects.[/align]

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And here is one of my newest cards:

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This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 3 Winged Beast-Type monsters you control (This card cannot be Set). This card's original ATK becomes the sum of the respective ATK of the Tributes. This card cannot attack in the turn it is Summoned. Once per turn' date=' during your Main Phase 1, you can remove from play 1 card from your hand, field or Graveyard to increases this card's DEF by 750. When this card's DEF is 3000 or higher, this card can attack your opponent directly.[/align']

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Hey, umm....

I'm working on a 50-card set that will focus around the "Silver Slayer" monsters, like Teresa, who I showed you earlier.

I try to make my cards as realistic as possible, but, since the series is based off of an anime, should they be in the pop-culture section or the any other cards section?

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