Dranzer Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Username:Dranzer TMStars:4What Card Group Do You belong in? Novice? Average? Advanced? Expert? Pro?:somewhere between average and advancedExample Of Your Work: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Username: DeustodoStars: 5What Card Group Do You belong in? Novice? Average? Advanced? Expert? Pro?: Hell if I know.[align=center][spoiler=Example Of Your Work]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when "Perfect Zone of Chaos" is on the field and by Tributing 1 FIRE, 1 WATER, 1 EARTH and 1 WATER monster you control. This card is unaffected by Monster, Spell and Trap Card Effects. This card's Attribute is also treated as LIGHT, DARK, EARTH, WIND, WATER and FIRE. This card cannot attack in the turn it is Summoned. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if there are monsters on the field with 3 differents Attributes, this card can attack your opponent directly. When this card attack your opponent directly, the Battle Damage this card inflicts is halved.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 thank you very much ĐŕANZĔŔ™ and you will be in novice. Don't worry I am surure you will be and advanced in no timeUsername: DeustodoStars: 5What Card Group Do You belong in? Novice? Average? Advanced? Expert? Pro?: Hell if I know.[align=center][spoiler=Example Of Your Work]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when "Perfect Zone of Chaos" is on the field and by Tributing 1 FIRE' date=' 1 WATER, 1 EARTH and 1 WATER monster you control. This card is unaffected by Monster, Spell and Trap Card Effects. This card's Attribute is also treated as LIGHT, DARK, EARTH, WIND, WATER and FIRE. This card cannot attack in the turn it is Summoned. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if there are monsters on the field with 3 differents Attributes, this card can attack your opponent directly. When this card attack your opponent directly, the Battle Damage this card inflicts is halved.[/align'] ProThat card is so good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Is my lore realy that bad? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Pro is the highest rank right? (I'm not counting Co-Leader or Leader) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 The highest of OCG rankings without counting co leaders and leaders. That would be a yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SparkWyvren Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 well, if i'm invited then why not join? Username: ~Majestic Shadow~Stars: 3:(What Card Group Do You belong in? Novice? Average? Advanced? Expert? Pro?: no ideaExample Of Your Work: [spoiler= lore]When this card is Normal Summoned, select one Monster in your Deck and send it to the Graveyard. This card's Attack and Defense becomes the attack and defense of the sent Monster. When this card is Special Summoned, Return one monster from your Graveyard to your Deck. This card's Attack and Defense becomes the attack and defense of the returned Monster. When this card is Summoned, it's controller takes 1000 points of Direct Damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Is my lore realy that bad? OCG errors. A little bad but I am sure my pros will fix itwell' date=' if i'm invited then why not join? Username: ~Majestic Shadow~Stars: 3:(What Card Group Do You belong in? Novice? Average? Advanced? Expert? Pro?: no ideaExample Of Your Work: [img']http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/6230/203181r.jpg[/img][spoiler= lore]When this card is Normal Summoned, select one Monster in your Deck and send it to the Graveyard. This card's Attack and Defense becomes the attack and defense of the sent Monster. When this card is Special Summoned, Return one monster from your Graveyard to your Deck. This card's Attack and Defense becomes the attack and defense of the returned Monster. When this card is Summoned, it's controller takes 1000 points of Direct Damage. advanced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Is my lore realy that bad? You miss some points, like, the correct OCG would be:"When this card is used as Synchro Material Monster, you can pay 600 Life Points to Special Summon this card (When? I don't know)." You don't need to type "on your side of the field", just Special Summon is fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Thanks for that OCG fix he needed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SparkWyvren Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 YES!!!! i'm better then i thought! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Your an advanced cardmaker. But your not at the teaching level yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 How is it now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 I doubt our levels will increase so quickly ĐŕANZĔŔ™, we just started, and we need to actually learn before anything... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 I believ that too,but I hope I learn good OCG hear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Yes. Be patient. you do not change ranks immediately Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Username: MindscatterStars: enoughWhat Card Group Do You belong in? Novice? Average? Advanced? Expert? Pro?: you chooseExample Of Your Work: [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Set. This card cannot be Normal Summoned except by Tributing 1 monster with "Monarch", "Lord" or "War" in its name and 1 WATER monster. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Every time this card destroys a monster by battle, increase its Level by 1 (max. 12). During your Main Phase, you can Tribute this card to destroy monsters your opponent controls whose combined Levels are lower or equal with this card's Level OR destroy 2 face-down monsters your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed by card effects, its effect activates. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Thanks for the invite :) So do we discuss OCG ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daxter Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Username: RiddlerStars: 4 What Card Group Do You belong in? Novice? Average? Advanced? Expert? Pro?: Advanced I suppose, you can put me where you think I belong Example Of Your Work:[spoiler=Card Lore:]This card cannot be Normal Summoned. This card can only be Special Summon when 1 Insect-Type monster you control is removed from play by opponent card effect. When this card is Special Summoned discard 2 cards from your hand to Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Insect-Type monster from your Graveyard. During your Standby Phase, you can select 1 Level 4 or lower Insect-Type monster you control. During your End Phase, place the selected monster on your opponents side of the field. During each Standby Phase your opponent controls the selected card, inflict 700 points of Direct Damage to your opponents Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 ?The-Riddler? Expert, Mindscatter advanced. Some correections on the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Dranzer, "on your side of the field" is totally unecessary in the card effect, just cut that off and you will have a good OCG. You can put "in Attack Position" or "in face-up (or face-down) Defense Position". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Thanks for the invite :) So do we discuss OCG ? First i need you to fill out the app forum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Username: HP DoomStars: 4 I would say Expert or Pro [spoiler=][align=center] LoreWhen this card is Summoned, except by its own effect, remove it from play. If this this card was removed from play by its own effect, you can place it in your Extra Deck to negate the Special Summon of 1 LIGHT or DARK monster, and place it at the bottom of your opponent's Deck. If your opponent Summons a Synchro Monster while this card is in your Extra Deck, Special Summon this card and return all Synchro Monster on the field to their respective owners Extra Decks. You can pay halve of your Life Points to remove this card from play.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 God this is hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 How to join:Username:Yu-Gi-Oh 5D`SStars:5What Card Group Do You belong in AverageExample Of Your Work: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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