Silent Swordsmen

[Yang Xiao-Long]

Well, I'm new here, I'll admit that. So I'm starting a thread to see if I can get some cards in.

 

 

 

Since I'm editing, I might as well put the Lore here for LV11:

 

Silent Swordsman LV11:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Silent Swordsman LV9". As long as this card remains face-up on the field, negate the effects of and remove from play all Spell Cards on your opponent's field. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.

[ragnarok1945]

the first pic is overused

 

and I can't read the lore, can you write it out?

[Yang Xiao-Long]

Oops, sorry! *facepalm*

 

here is the lore for the first one:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot

be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Silent Swordsman LV7"

from your side of the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field,

negate the effects of all Spell Cards on the field and destroy them. If this card

successfully attacks your opponent directly, you may tribute this card to Special

Summon 1 "Silent Swordsman LV11" from your hand or Deck.

 

Second one:

This card canot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special

Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Silent Swordsman LV9" from your side of

the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, negate the effects

of all Spell Cards on the field and remove them from play. This card cannot be

destroyed as a result of battle.

[◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊]

On the 1st Card, at the very end.....

"....you can Tribute this card...."

 

The second card is flawless.....

I guess the stats are reasonable.....

9.9/10

Amazing for your first cards. I kind of think most of the Effect was taken from the "Silent Swordsmen" cards.

[Twig]

9/10 on first one, I care about backgrounds.

10/10 on your second. Fantastic for a new guy.

[ragnarok1945]

Oops' date=' sorry! *facepalm*

 

here is the lore for the first one:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot

be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Silent Swordsman LV7"

from your side of the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field,

negate the effects of all Spell Cards on the field and destroy them. If this card

successfully attacks your opponent directly, you may tribute this card to Special

Summon 1 "Silent Swordsman LV11" from your hand or Deck.

 

Second one:

This card canot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special

Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Silent Swordsman LV9" from your side of

the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, negate the effects

of all Spell Cards on the field and remove them from play. This card cannot be

destroyed as a result of battle.

[/quote']

 

that's better, NOW I can give it the 9.8/10 for great effects and OCG

[Aero~]

good OCG 9/10

[Demon Eyes Kyo]

the first pic is overused

 

and I can't read the lore' date=' can you write it out?

[/quote']He's new how will he know it's overused?

Anyways, the card:

OCG 9/10

ART 10/10

Concept 10/10

Balance 10/10

TOTAL:39/40

YOur Quote:

Follow the path of more interest in OCG and minor flaws use the ocg thread :)

[Silver]

You're good. Unbelievably good.

There's nothing to say really.

I'll give you an A

[Krokosaurus]

Very good cards, but doesn´t the last sentence of the first card don´t work?

Anyway, good pic for the second card.

9.9/10

[White Hollow]

9/10 and 9.7/10

[ParadoxDuelist]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot

be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Silent Swordsman LV7" on your side of the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, negate the effects of all Spell Cards on the field and destroy them. If this card successfully attacks your opponent directly, you can tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Silent Swordsman LV11" from your hand or deck.

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Silent Swordsman LV9" from your side of the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, negate the effects

of all Spell Cards on the field and remove them from play. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.

 

Overall I like the idea, pics could be better but I usually don't judge people based on pics. You are the only person as far as I know to have made a LV Monster that surpassed LV 10 but that's not really a problem. Your OCG tends to only be minor so for that I'll give you a:

B RANK.

[Metal Skull]

1st card is bad because of pic

Effect is good anyway

2nd id fine

8/10

[Sleepy]

I like the art on the real Silent Swordsman cards too much to agree with your versions xD but still ok.

 

Just to give you some stuff to work with:

 

-LV monsters don't "Tribute", just "send to the Graveyard". What's the difference? LV monsters won't be affected by Mask of Restrict.

 

-The way Silent Swordsman LV 9 "Tributes" itself for LV11 needs to be re-worded. According to the card, you Tribute it right after you attack with it and then you are able to attack with LV11 in the same turn because of that. Or was it on purpose? O_o

It would be something like what's written in Silent Swordsman LV7's card effect.

 

Minor Flaws, OK pic, good for a new member actually ;)

9/10 for starters.

[Yang Xiao-Long]

I did a redo on "Silent Swordsmen LV9" (changed the pic and made its effect more specific)

 

 

 

Lore:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your Hand or Deck by sending 1 face-up "Silent Swordsman LV7" to the Graveyard during your Standby Phase. You cannot activate this effect the turn "Silent Swordsman LV7" was Summoned. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, negate the effects of and destroy all Spell Cards on your opponent's field. If this card successfully attacks your opponent directly, during your next Standby Phase, by sending this face-up card to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Silent Swordsman LV11" from your hand or Deck.

[[P]hoeniX]

u can edit to put both of then togheter, and the lore too

N maybe is a impression of mine but the card dont work togheter

the lvl11 cant be summoned by the effect of lvl 9

 

SSLvl11

This card canot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special

Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Silent Swordsman LV9" from your side of

the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, negate the effects of all Spell Cards on the field and remove them from play. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.

 

should be:

This card cannot be SpecialSummoned except by the effect of "Silent Swordsman LV9".

 

maybe Im wrong but....

ciao

by the way really good cards

[Leturn Master]

All the above posts have missed something crucial. Your OCGSP has a critical flaw, preventing the playability of "Silent Swordsman LV11" (not that he'd be Summonable anyways... waiting a MINIMUM of 3 turns is just too much time.). But I'll get to that.

 

In order to increase the playability of these cards, I recommend changing "Silent Swordsman LV9's" effect to something like "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your Hand or Deck by sending 1 face-up "Silent Swordsman LV7" to the Graveyard during your Standby Phase. You cannot activate this effect the turn "Silent Swordsman LV7" was Summoned."

 

This will give more playability (though you can't really give playability to a LV card at this high of a Level...) and balance. Also, the effect is the exact same as "LV7", and all I really care about is my OPPONENT'S Spell Cards not working, so I'd have this card negate the effects of and destroy all my opponent's Spell Cards

 

For the last guy, the first sentances should be "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Silent Swordsman LV9"." If you don't write it that way, then LV9 will Summon LV11 from the Deck, but LV11's effect intones that it can only be Summoned from the hand. So it wouldn't get Summoned (unless you had LV11 in your hand...).

 

Anyway, yeah. The cards aren't great... but they're better than the average creations of your average 1-star members. Keep it up, man.

 

:mrgreen: