Free Style Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Lore : This card is changed to Defense Position when it is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned successfully. This card can attack while it is in Defense Position. If this card attacks while in Defense Position, apply the ATK of this card for damage calculation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 the effect is confusing. i think that you try to put the same effect of the EH fusion of burtinatrix and clayman. i dont remember the name now. a lot of OCG errors that i try to repair later:) i rate when i post the reparation:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Why is it that everyone who uses that pictures uses the name "Charmer" in the card? OCG errors I think. I like the pic. Totally original name bro. *Shot* OCG Fix:When this monster is Summoned (Excluding Special Summon.) it is placed on the field in Defense Position. This card can attack while it is in Defense Position. Not sure if that's right. Anyway, does she attack with her ATK or DEF? Won't know if it's UP'd or OP'd untill I understand. D: Effect's a little bland too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Taht's nasically what I was giong to say. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Free Style Posted December 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 How is there OCG errors if I took that effect from a monster called Total Defense Shogun? o_o And Zeonark, I couldn't think of a better name so I just added the "Charmer". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 How is there OCG errors if I took that effect from a monster called Total Defense Shogun? o_o And Zeonark' date=' I couldn't think of a better name so I just added the "Charmer".[/quote'] You did? I checked Total Defense Shogun and the OCG is different. You sure it's the same monster? Slashed Text is a joke/Sarcasm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Free Style Posted December 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 How is there OCG errors if I took that effect from a monster called Total Defense Shogun? o_o And Zeonark' date=' I couldn't think of a better name so I just added the "Charmer".[/quote'] You did? I checked Total Defense Shogun and the OCG is different. You sure it's the same monster? Slashed Text is a joke/Sarcasm. Maybe what I took is different from what you took. o: And I know that slashed test is a joke/sarcasm. xP Just wanted to say it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 How is there OCG errors if I took that effect from a monster called Total Defense Shogun? o_o And Zeonark' date=' I couldn't think of a better name so I just added the "Charmer".[/quote'] You did? I checked Total Defense Shogun and the OCG is different. You sure it's the same monster? Slashed Text is a joke/Sarcasm. Maybe what I took is different from what you took. o: And I know that slashed test is a joke/sarcasm. xP Just wanted to say it. Did you get it from Yugioh Wikia? If not, you probably got something different instead of mine. xD Ah. Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.F.Yuji Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 If it's effect is like Rampart Blaster, then shouldn't it be "When this card is Summoned, aside from Special Summon, it is placed on the field in Defense Position. While this card is in face-up Defense Position, this card can declare an attack without being in Attack Position" Or something like that, not exactly sure myself :P. Anyway, I like the card, 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krokosaurus Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 It´s not only name, you copied the whole "Total Defense Shogun" (with 50 ATK and DEF less ;) )!!!5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Free Style Posted December 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 It´s not only name' date=' you copied the whole "Total Defense Shogun" (with 50 ATK and DEF less ;) )!!!5/10[/quote'] I couldn't think of a better name so I just copied his name and instead of Shogun, I wrote "Charmer". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 I couldn't think of a better name so I just copied his name and instead of Shogun' date=' I wrote "Charmer".[/quote'] How about "Total Frost Defender"? Best I could come up with for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Free Style Posted December 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 I couldn't think of a better name so I just copied his name and instead of Shogun' date=' I wrote "Charmer".[/quote'] How about "Total Frost Defender"? Best I could come up with for you. Yeah! That sounds great, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 So it's pretty much the same as Total Defense Shogun? Totally original broseph. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sebihp2007 Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Actually, the correct text would be: This card is changed to Defense Position when it is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned successfully. This card can attack while it is in Defense Position. If this card attacks while in Defense Position, apply the ATK of this card for damage calculation And it's a copy for Total Defense Shogun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParadoxDuelist Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 I think maybe it's like this: When this monster is successfully Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned it is switched into defense position. Once per turn while this card is in defense position you can inflict an amount of damage equal to the DEF of this monster to your opponent. This damage is treated as Battle Damage. So the card; confusing. But then again after deciphered it's not really that unique. It's basically like gustavosuarez said, it's basically a remake of "Elemental Hero - Rampart Blaster". So for that I'll give you a C Rank. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 It's not a "Rampart Blaster", is a "Total Defense Shogun" unoriginal but the effect is still good so 7.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 really weird wording, so there's the OCG errors in terms of effects though it does look balanced, but bland 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChilderensCardGames Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Text is very wrong. Well if it can't get it's eggecy by speecial summon then it can only get it from tribute so it should be (i think): When this card is Tribute summoned successfuly, it's position is changed to DEF mode. This card can ATK whilst in Attack mode. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Free Style Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 I fixed the OCG. What do you think now, guys? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 it's better for OCG now, but the effect is still bland Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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