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Since the manga is drawing near, I would like to show the booster pack of the manga....Not all cards in this pack will appear....

 

Hope you like this Set~~!! I'll be updating soon about the cards~~!!

 

Enforcer Machinima edited effect and Dementia and Ritual Spell Card Added~~!!

 

# English Set Name:The Road of the Duelist

# OCG Set Prefix: TRDL

# Cover Card: Fancy Hero Valerie Winguard

# Features:

* Features the latest cards from the Yugioh DQ Manga.

* Yumi Fuuko's deck "Fancy Heroes" is the focus.

* Includes cards used by Yumi Fuuko, Floresca, Ares Gainsborough, Alexa Raine, Randolph, Monica and Ikari Jenny

* Special Participation Card : Roselianne Flora

* Includes Fancy Hero, Roselianne, Dark Kaiser, Maidservant, Mirage Empress, Battle Maiden, Knights and Enforcer archetypes.

* Includes support cards to Blackwing and Fortune Lady

* Includes 75 cards

 

[spoiler=TDRLSP001 - Roselianne Flora ]

RoselianneFlora.jpg

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p><p>[center][img]<a href=http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd79/otohimechizuru/The%20Road%20of%20the%20Duelist/FancyHeroErminguard.jpg' alt='FancyHeroErminguard.jpg'>[/center]

p><p>[center][img]<a href=http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd79/otohimechizuru/The%20Road%20of%20the%20Duelist/FancyHeroLucie.jpg' alt='FancyHeroLucie.jpg'>[/center]

[b]When this card attacks, increase this card

 

[spoiler=TRDL-EN004 - Fancy Hero Statica ]

[b]As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all opponent

 

[spoiler=TRDL-EN005 - Roselianne Tulip ]

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EnforcerMachinima.jpg[/center]

p><p>TRDL-EN022 - Club

TRDL-EN023 - Heart's Knight

TRDL-EN024 - Diamond's Knight

TRDL-EN025 - Spade's Knight

TRDL-EN026 -

TRDL-EN027 -

TRDL-EN028 -

TRDL-EN029 - Fortune Apprentice Kyoko

TRDL-EN030 - Fortune Apprentice Mei

[spoiler=TRDL-EN031 - Headnurse Lily ]

[b]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 "Injection Fairy Lily" or "Counselor Lily" you control. Once, during either player

 

[spoiler=TRDL-EN032 - Crimson Archfiend Morgana ]

[b]Once per turn, you can move this card into an adjacent unoccupied Monster Card Zone. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, the effects of all other cards in this card

 

TRDL-EN033 - Celiene The Mystical

TRDL-EN034 -

TRDL-EN035 -

[spoiler=TRDL-EN036 - Mirage Empress Shiroko ]

[b]When you Tribute Summon this card, the Tribute Monsters must be LIGHT monsters. This card

 

[spoiler=TRDL-EN037 - Mirage Empress Anko ]

[b]When you Tribute Summon this card, the Tribute Monsters must be DARK monsters. This card

 

[spoiler=TRDL-EN038 - Mirage Empress Enko ]

[b]When you Tribute Summon this card, the Tribute Monsters must be FIRE monsters. This card

 

[spoiler=TRDL-EN039 - Blackwing - Maiden of Cyclone ]

[b]If you control a "Blackwing" monster other than "Blackwing - Maiden of Cyclone", you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When a face-up "Blackwing" monster you control inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent

 

[spoiler=TRDL-EN040 - Dementia, Queen of Vampires (NEW~~!!!)]

[b]This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the Ritual Spell Card " Ritual of Malice". This card is unaffected by your opponent

 

[spoiler=TRDL-EN041 - Fancy Hero Valerie Winguard ]

p><p>This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. This card can attack your opponent directly. If it does, this card

 

[spoiler=TRDL-EN042 - Fancy Hero Nova Starfire ]

p><p>If it battles a monster with a higher Level, this card gains 500 ATK x the difference in Levels (during that battle only). When this card destroys a monster and sends it to Graveyard, inflict damages to your opponent

 

[spoiler=TRDL-EN043 - Roselianne Daisy ]

p><p>Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can place 1 "Seed Counter" on a face-up monster your opponent controls. You can remove 3 Seed Counters on the field to destroy 1 face-up monster your opponent controls and inflict damages to your opponent

 

[spoiler=TRDL-EN044 - Dark Kaiser Archfiend Knight ]

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[b]1 "Blackwing" Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner "Harpie" monsters except "Harpie

This card's attribute is also treated as WIND. This card's name is also treated as "Harpie Lady". Once per turn, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Blackwing" or "Harpie" monster except "Harpie's Brother"from your hand. Each time you Special Summon a "Blackwing" or "Harpy" monster this way, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls . This card inflicts piercing damage. When this card is destroyed, you can remove from play 1 "Blackwing" and 1 "Harpie" except "Harpie's Brother" from your Graveyard to Special Summon this card.[/b]

 

TRDL-EN046 - Prism Red Darkness Dragon

TRDL-EN047 - Gigantic Chief Maid of the Mansion

[spoiler=TRDL-EN048 - Fancy Tower ]

[b]When a "Fancy Hero" monster attacks, if its ATK is lower than the ATK of the attack target, the attacking monster gains 1000 ATK during damage calculation only. Each time a "Fancy Hero" monster you comtrol is destroyed, put 1 "Fancy Counter" unto this card (max. 3). You can remove 3 "Fancy Counters" unto this card to Special Summon 1 "Fancy Hero" monster from your Graveyard to your side of the field, ignoring any Summoning Conditions it may have (Only this card

 

[spoiler=TRDL-EN049 - Fantasy Fusion ]

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Activate only when a monster on your side of the field is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard. Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Fancy Hero" monster from your hand or Deck.

 

TRDL-EN064 - Counter Break!

TRDL-EN065 -

TRDL-EN066 -

TRDL-EN067 -

TRDL-EN068 - Draining Revenge

TRDL-EN069 - Faustian Rebirth

TRDL-EN070 - Attack Magnet

TRDL-EN071 -

TRDL-EN072 -

TRDL-EN073 -

TRDL-EN074 - The King's Royal Order

TRDL-EN075 -

 

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Guest Zeonark

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Ohshi-

Stuff is about to get epic in this here thread. Excited about the manga too. Most of us have already rated/commented/seen some of these. So I'll rate the new ones.

 

Mirage Empress Shiroko:

Why do I imagine this in a Lightsworn deck? Seems decently balanced. And this card can be quite the annoyance, only getting sent to the deck once destroyed instead of the graveyard. Nice picture and I can't see a OCG error.

 

Mirage Empress Anko:

Cute name. Cute picture. A combo you seem to have down quite nicely in nearly every card you make. Lol. ATK/DEF determined like Shiroko's...hmm. It's effect is nearly like...errr...Was it Dark Panther or Prisma? I don't know. But it's similar to one of them. Nice anyway. Like the first. No OCG errors.

 

Mirage Empress Enko:

Three of them? I detect a future archetype. This card is somewhat overpowered. Massive ATK gain and dealing burn damage. It's still a awesome combo though. Meh. Cute picture and no OCG errors found from me.

 

Enforcer Machinima:

Possible Lightsworn effect killer? I mean, if your opponent has alot of them, that's QUITE the bit of damage during the end phase for them. o_o I LIKE IT. 8D Nice looking pic and you can't find OCG errors in something that short. Lol.

 

 

9/10. Only from Enko though.

Way to go Chizu. Now I'm filled with excitment for this. xD

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These look good Chizu. Everything has already been stated by Zeonark, as his/her statement is true. I look forward to seeing the rest of this booster, especially the Roselianne cards. Overall I give this a 9.3/10

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I wish Kaibaman will finnish the Roselianne I requested...

 

Patience Chizu...patience. Plus when we finally get them, you know everyone is going to rip through crowds just to see and comment on them. xD You should be proud to have such expectations. =P

 

What does this Roselianne archetype focus on? Is it a Plant-Type Archetype?

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[spoiler=OCG Fixes and Suggestions]

Athena

 

While you control a different face-up "Fancy Hero" monster, this card can attack your opponent directly.

 

 

Erminguard

 

While I am grateful you've used the correct spelling of 'defence'; since this is an American translation, you have to use their way of spelling it.

 

While this card is in face-up Defense Position on your side of the field, your opponent cannot select a face-up "Fancy Hero" monster as an attack target except "Fancy Hero Erminguard".

 

 

Lucie

 

If this card attacks an opponent's monster, this card gains 800 ATK during the Damage Step only.

 

I would give it an extra effect to balance out the ATK gain, perhaps having to discard 1 or 2 cards when it is destroyed.

 

 

Statica

 

When this card is Summoned, flip any face-down monsters face-up (Flip Effects are not activated). Monsters flipped by this card's effect have their effects negated. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot Set monsters or flip them face-down.

 

 

Enforcer Machinima

 

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, each time either player activates a Card Effect, inflict 1000 points of damage to that player.

 

Overpowered and overburning as well. The only similar card is "Black Executioner", which has difficult Summoning Conditions and can only activate when Normal Spell Cards are used. Considering that certain turns can use up to 4 or 5 Card Effects; for example, moving "Monster Reborn" from your Graveyard to your hand, activating it, equipping an Equip Spell Card and then a Continuous Trap Card; you (or your opponent) have lost 4000 LP before the Battle Phase. Reduce the burn to 200. 1000 is far too much for a non-Tribute monster.

 

 

Headnurse Lily and Crimson Archfiend Morgana

 

Already fixed.

 

 

Shiroko

 

Change the ATK value to '?'

 

If you Tribute Summon this card, the Tributes must be LIGHT monsters. This card's ATK is equal to the combined ATK of the Tributed monsters. Once per turn, you can discard 1 LIGHT monster from your hand to select 1 Effect Monster your opponent controls and negate its effect, until your End Phase. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, it is returned to your Deck instead.

 

I think this would be overpowered. Considering the sheer power of the lower-levelled Lightsworns, you could easily have a 3500+ ATK monster very quickly. I suggest this effect change.

 

This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Tributing 1 Level 5 or higher LIGHT monster. This card's ATK is equal to the ATK of the Tributed monster. Once per turn, you can discard 1 LIGHT monster from your hand to select 1 Effect Monster your opponent controls and negate its effect, until your End Phase. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, it is returned to your Deck instead.

 

 

Anko

 

If you Tribute Summon this card, the Tributes must be DARK monsters. This card's ATK is equal to the combined ATK of the Tributed monsters. Once per turn, you can select 1 Effect Monster your opponent controls. This card gains the selected card's effect, until your End Phase. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, it is returned to your Deck instead.

 

Again, overpowered; but even more so. Think about the ATK of "Archfiends" and Zombies (both DARK Archetypes). Plus, considering this effect doesn't have a cost, it reduces the balance some more.

 

This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Tributing 1 Level 5 or higher DARK monster. This card's ATK is equal to the ATK of the Tributed monster. Once per turn, you can discard 1 DARK monster from your hand to select 1 Effect Monster your opponent controls. This card gains the selected card's effect, until your End Phase. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, it is returned to your Deck instead.

 

 

Enko

 

If you Tribute Summon this card, the Tributes must be FIRE monsters. This card's ATK is equal to the combined ATK of the Tributed monsters. Once per turn, you can select 1 monster your opponent controls. This card gains ATK equal to the selected monster's ATK, until your End Phase. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict 1000 points of damage to the destroyed monster's controller. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, it is returned to your Deck instead.

 

...So overpowered. At least 2500 ATK from the start, then you can select another monster to gain another 1000 +, taking to around 4000. It can then destroy the selected monster, causing Battle Damage and then another 1000 points of damage. And this one doesn't have a cost either.

 

This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Tributing 1 Level 5 or higher FIRE monster. This card's ATK is equal to the ATK of the Tributed monster. Once per turn, you can discard 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster from your hand for this card to gain ATK equal to the discarded monster. When this card is removed from the field, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent. This effect can only be used twice per Duel. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, it is returned to your Deck instead.

 

 

Maiden of Cyclone

 

I personally would change the name to "Blackwing - Cyclone Maiden" since it flows rather better.

 

If you control a different face-up "Blackwing" monster, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, when a "Blackwing" monster destroys a monster by battle, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls.

 

 

Valerie Winguard

 

"Fancy Hero Athena" + "Fancy Hero Erminguard"

This card cannot be Summoned except by Fusion Summon. This card can attack your opponent directly by halving its ATK. If this card is attacked by an opponent's monster, it is switched to Defense Position.

 

 

Fancy Hero Nova Starfire

 

"Fancy Hero Lucie" + "Fancy Hero Statica"

If this card attacks a monster whose Level is higher than this card's Level, this card gains ATK equal to the difference in Levels x 500, until the end of the Battle Phase. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict an amount of damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x 300.

 

This is rather overpowered. Doing the maths, this card could destroy both 5000 ATK monsters in the game, which is of course overpowered for a 2-monster Level 6 Fusion. There are two options, either add a cost to the effect and reduce the gain (1) or add an equal and opposite effect (2).

 

(1)

"Fancy Hero Lucie" + "Fancy Hero Statica"

If this card attacks a monster whose Level is higher than this card's Level, you can discard a number of cards from your hand for this card to gain ATK equal to the difference in Levels x 300, until the end of the Battle Phase. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict an amount of damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x 300.

 

 

(2)

"Fancy Hero Lucie" + "Fancy Hero Statica"

If this card attacks a monster whose Level is higher than this card's Level, this card gains ATK equal to the difference in Levels x 500, until the end of the Battle Phase. If this card attacks a monster whose Level is lower than this card's Level, this card loses ATK equal to the difference in Levels x 500. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict an amount of damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x 300. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, lose Life Points equal to this card's Level x 200.

 

 

Blackwing - Harpie Empress

 

1 "Blackwing" Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner "Harpie" monsters, except "Harpie's Brother"

This card cannot be Summoned except by Synchro Summon or its own effect. This card is also treated as a WIND "Harpie Lady" monster. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Blackwing" or "Harpie Lady" monster, except "Harpie's Brother" from your hand. Each time a monster is Summoned this way, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. This card inflicts Piercing damage. When this card is destroyed, you can remove 1 "Blackwing" or "Harpie" monster, except "Harpie's Brother" in your Graveyard from play to Special Summon this card in Attack Position.

 

The last part is overpowered, since you have already sent the Synchro materials to the Graveyard providing enough fuel for at least 3 resurrections. I suggest an addition to the effect.

 

...When this card is destroyed, you can remove 1 "Blackwing" or "Harpie" monster, except "Harpie's Brother" in your Graveyard from play to Special Summon this card in Attack Position. If this card is Summoned this way, this card loses ATK and DEF equal to the removed monster's ATK and DEF.

 

ie, the more you bring it back, the less time it'll survive.

 

 

Fancy Tower

 

If a "Fancy Hero" monster you control attacks a monster with a higher ATK, the attacking monster gains 1000 ATK, during Damage Calculation only. Each time a "Fancy Hero" monster you control is destroyed by battle, put 1 Fancy Counter on this card (Max. 3). Once per turn, you can remove 3 Fancy Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 "Fancy Hero" monster from your Deck, ignoring the Summoning Conditions.

 

You don't need the last part of the effect due to the rules surrounding counters.

 

 

Fantasy Fusion

 

Remove from play, from your hand or Graveyard, Fusion Material Monsters that are listed on a "Fancy Hero" Fusion Monster Card, and Special Summon that Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck. (This Special Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon.) During your Main Phase, you can remove from play this card from your Graveyard to make the Summoned Fusion Monster become un-targetable by effects this turn.

 

Slight change to the effect of the effect to make it less splashable.

 

 

Fancy Signal

 

Activate only when a monster you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Fancy Hero" monster from your hand or Deck in Attack Position.

 

 

 

 

As mentioned above, some are overpowered or have other faults. Also, your OCG is rather bizarre; a hybrid like mine, but with some recurring mistakes.

 

7/10 for your efforts.

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Lolol.

 

Epic Female Deck.

 

For the Fancy Heroes, they're basically like their Male Counterparts, Elemental Heroes. You should make Evil Hero Counterparts? Not sure.

 

Hey, direct attacks! Seems like Meta. So does increasing ATK when battling.

 

Erminguard focuses on preventing your opponents from dealing direct damage. I likey. We're all f***ed if Piercing Damage says hai.

 

You'll never know who runs a Vanilla Deck. Hehehe.

 

Synchroes and Fusions can appear in the same story. I'm shocked.

 

10/10

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also i think you should make ur sig smaller ' date=' cause i know some people getting negged for that :/

 

just saying :P

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no need...i like it that way...

 

I wish Kaibaman will finnish the Roselianne I requested...

 

Patience Chizu...patience. Plus when we finally get them' date=' you know everyone is going to rip through crowds just to see and comment on them. xD You should be proud to have such expectations. =P

 

What does this Roselianne archetype focus on? Is it a Plant-Type Archetype?

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yes..its a plant type monsters used by floresca..actully they are expert of using seed counters and seed tokens...you will know later on in this set

 

10.5/10 great cards

 

thanks~!

 

[spoiler=OCG Fixes and Suggestions]

Athena

 

While you control a different face-up "Fancy Hero" monster' date=' this card can attack your opponent directly.

 

 

[b']Erminguard[/b]

 

While I am grateful you've used the correct spelling of 'defence'; since this is an American translation, you have to use their way of spelling it.

 

While this card is in face-up Defense Position on your side of the field, your opponent cannot select a face-up "Fancy Hero" monster as an attack target except "Fancy Hero Erminguard".

 

 

Lucie

 

If this card attacks an opponent's monster, this card gains 800 ATK during the Damage Step only.

 

I would give it an extra effect to balance out the ATK gain, perhaps having to discard 1 or 2 cards when it is destroyed.

 

no need to change lucies effect...imagine a lvl 2 monster with a 2000 atk points??

 

Statica

 

When this card is Summoned, flip any face-down monsters face-up (Flip Effects are not activated). Monsters flipped by this card's effect have their effects negated. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot Set monsters or flip them face-down.

 

 

Enforcer Machinima

 

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, each time either player activates a Card Effect, inflict 1000 points of damage to that player.

 

Overpowered and overburning as well. The only similar card is "Black Executioner", which has difficult Summoning Conditions and can only activate when Normal Spell Cards are used. Considering that certain turns can use up to 4 or 5 Card Effects; for example, moving "Monster Reborn" from your Graveyard to your hand, activating it, equipping an Equip Spell Card and then a Continuous Trap Card; you (or your opponent) have lost 4000 LP before the Battle Phase. Reduce the burn to 200. 1000 is far too much for a non-Tribute monster.

 

its ok..cause enforcers are expert in nagating disabling and restricting effects...you can easily destroys it by a summoning destroying effects~!!

 

 

Headnurse Lily and Crimson Archfiend Morgana

 

Already fixed.

 

 

Shiroko

 

Change the ATK value to '?'

 

If you Tribute Summon this card, the Tributes must be LIGHT monsters. This card's ATK is equal to the combined ATK of the Tributed monsters. Once per turn, you can discard 1 LIGHT monster from your hand to select 1 Effect Monster your opponent controls and negate its effect, until your End Phase. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, it is returned to your Deck instead.

 

Ill be thinking about it....

 

I think this would be overpowered. Considering the sheer power of the lower-levelled Lightsworns, you could easily have a 3500+ ATK monster very quickly. I suggest this effect change.

 

This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Tributing 1 Level 5 or higher LIGHT monster. This card's ATK is equal to the ATK of the Tributed monster. Once per turn, you can discard 1 LIGHT monster from your hand to select 1 Effect Monster your opponent controls and negate its effect, until your End Phase. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, it is returned to your Deck instead.

 

 

Anko

 

If you Tribute Summon this card, the Tributes must be DARK monsters. This card's ATK is equal to the combined ATK of the Tributed monsters. Once per turn, you can select 1 Effect Monster your opponent controls. This card gains the selected card's effect, until your End Phase. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, it is returned to your Deck instead.

 

Again, overpowered; but even more so. Think about the ATK of "Archfiends" and Zombies (both DARK Archetypes). Plus, considering this effect doesn't have a cost, it reduces the balance some more.

 

This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Tributing 1 Level 5 or higher DARK monster. This card's ATK is equal to the ATK of the Tributed monster. Once per turn, you can discard 1 DARK monster from your hand to select 1 Effect Monster your opponent controls. This card gains the selected card's effect, until your End Phase. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, it is returned to your Deck instead.

 

 

Enko

 

If you Tribute Summon this card, the Tributes must be FIRE monsters. This card's ATK is equal to the combined ATK of the Tributed monsters. Once per turn, you can select 1 monster your opponent controls. This card gains ATK equal to the selected monster's ATK, until your End Phase. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict 1000 points of damage to the destroyed monster's controller. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, it is returned to your Deck instead.

 

...So overpowered. At least 2500 ATK from the start, then you can select another monster to gain another 1000 +, taking to around 4000. It can then destroy the selected monster, causing Battle Damage and then another 1000 points of damage. And this one doesn't have a cost either.

 

This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Tributing 1 Level 5 or higher FIRE monster. This card's ATK is equal to the ATK of the Tributed monster. Once per turn, you can discard 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster from your hand for this card to gain ATK equal to the discarded monster. When this card is removed from the field, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent. This effect can only be used twice per Duel. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, it is returned to your Deck instead.

 

ill edit it...

 

Maiden of Cyclone

 

I personally would change the name to "Blackwing - Cyclone Maiden" since it flows rather better.

 

no need ....like blackwing - gale of the hurricane, blizzard of the far north, elfhin the raven...and almost blackwing monsters have a long name ..im just keep the name that way

 

 

If you control a different face-up "Blackwing" monster, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, when a "Blackwing" monster destroys a monster by battle, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls.

 

 

Valerie Winguard

 

"Fancy Hero Athena" + "Fancy Hero Erminguard"

This card cannot be Summoned except by Fusion Summon. This card can attack your opponent directly by halving its ATK. If this card is attacked by an opponent's monster, it is switched to Defense Position.

 

im just copied the effects of ehero rampart blaster and black stego OCG..

 

 

Fancy Hero Nova Starfire

 

"Fancy Hero Lucie" + "Fancy Hero Statica"

If this card attacks a monster whose Level is higher than this card's Level, this card gains ATK equal to the difference in Levels x 500, until the end of the Battle Phase. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict an amount of damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x 300.

 

This is rather overpowered. Doing the maths, this card could destroy both 5000 ATK monsters in the game, which is of course overpowered for a 2-monster Level 6 Fusion. There are two options, either add a cost to the effect and reduce the gain (1) or add an equal and opposite effect (2).

 

(1)

"Fancy Hero Lucie" + "Fancy Hero Statica"

If this card attacks a monster whose Level is higher than this card's Level, you can discard a number of cards from your hand for this card to gain ATK equal to the difference in Levels x 300, until the end of the Battle Phase. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict an amount of damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x 300.

 

 

(2)

"Fancy Hero Lucie" + "Fancy Hero Statica"

If this card attacks a monster whose Level is higher than this card's Level, this card gains ATK equal to the difference in Levels x 500, until the end of the Battle Phase. If this card attacks a monster whose Level is lower than this card's Level, this card loses ATK equal to the difference in Levels x 500. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict an amount of damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x 300. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, lose Life Points equal to this card's Level x 200.

 

 

Blackwing - Harpie Empress

 

1 "Blackwing" Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner "Harpie" monsters, except "Harpie's Brother"

This card cannot be Summoned except by Synchro Summon or its own effect. This card is also treated as a WIND "Harpie Lady" monster. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Blackwing" or "Harpie Lady" monster, except "Harpie's Brother" from your hand. Each time a monster is Summoned this way, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. This card inflicts Piercing damage. When this card is destroyed, you can remove 1 "Blackwing" or "Harpie" monster, except "Harpie's Brother" in your Graveyard from play to Special Summon this card in Attack Position.

 

The last part is overpowered, since you have already sent the Synchro materials to the Graveyard providing enough fuel for at least 3 resurrections. I suggest an addition to the effect.

 

...When this card is destroyed, you can remove 1 "Blackwing" or "Harpie" monster, except "Harpie's Brother" in your Graveyard from play to Special Summon this card in Attack Position. If this card is Summoned this way, this card loses ATK and DEF equal to the removed monster's ATK and DEF.

 

ie, the more you bring it back, the less time it'll survive.

 

in many card i see..there are more reliable cards like dark simorgh, destiny end dragoon, they have to remove required monsters to special summon it....why destiny end dragoon...it can only remove from play 1 d-hero to special summon it to your graveyard??

 

 

Fancy Tower

 

If a "Fancy Hero" monster you control attacks a monster with a higher ATK, the attacking monster gains 1000 ATK, during Damage Calculation only. Each time a "Fancy Hero" monster you control is destroyed by battle, put 1 Fancy Counter on this card (Max. 3). Once per turn, you can remove 3 Fancy Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 "Fancy Hero" monster from your Deck, ignoring the Summoning Conditions.

 

You don't need the last part of the effect due to the rules surrounding counters.

 

i just copied the last effects of skyscrapers 2 ....what if me and my opponent uses both fheroes?? and i activate the fancy tower???

 

 

Fantasy Fusion

 

Remove from play, from your hand or Graveyard, Fusion Material Monsters that are listed on a "Fancy Hero" Fusion Monster Card, and Special Summon that Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck. (This Special Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon.) During your Main Phase, you can remove from play this card from your Graveyard to make the Summoned Fusion Monster become un-targetable by effects this turn.

 

Slight change to the effect of the effect to make it less splashable.

 

 

Fancy Signal

 

Activate only when a monster you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Fancy Hero" monster from your hand or Deck in Attack Position.

 

 

 

 

As mentioned above, some are overpowered or have other faults. Also, your OCG is rather bizarre; a hybrid like mine, but with some recurring mistakes.

 

7/10 for your efforts.

 

thanks for the corrections...but im now getting the right ocg by copying the original yugioh card game...you are the best there is ~!!!!

 

 

Looks really promising' date=' Chizuru-chan! I am excited about seeing some cards from Ares, Floresca, and Ikari Jenny...

 

Next time Kaibaman holds a contest, I am submitting a bunch of arts for the Grand Sorceress!

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heheh sure does`!!

 

am suprized Kingdom neos isn't in their due to how my character with that card related to DQ aswell as the person who designed Cerce's monster >.>

(Added note: I see its only for those characters)

 

because thomas and cerce only appears in the manga special only...

 

I don't think we have enough images/cards to warrant being on the set' date=' Jaden...

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jaden?? why?? what r u implying??

 

Chizu if it comes to the point where you need card ideas for me for my character if am appearing in the next set just ask me and I'll let you know ^__^ tho this set sofar looks good

 

like i said you and cerce only appeared in the special saga

 

Lolol.

 

Epic Female Deck.

 

For the Fancy Heroes' date=' they're basically like their Male Counterparts, Elemental Heroes. You should make Evil Hero Counterparts? Not sure.

 

Hey, direct attacks! Seems like Meta. So does increasing ATK when battling.

 

Erminguard focuses on preventing your opponents from dealing direct damage. I likey. We're all f***ed if Piercing Damage says hai.

 

You'll never know who runs a Vanilla Deck. Hehehe.

 

Synchroes and Fusions can appear in the same story. I'm shocked.

 

10/10

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thanks jolta~!!

 

If you actually draw these (I dunno if you do' date=' but I'm assuming), then you're clearly the only user who's ever made selfdrawn cards on YCM who deserves an audience.

 

I clap and tip my hat for thee.

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clap the original artist who draw these fancy heroes..

 

These look good Chizu. Everything has already been stated by Zeonark' date=' as his/her statement is true. I look forward to seeing the rest of this booster, especially the Roselianne cards. Overall I give this a 9.3/10

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Like posted! ^^^^^^^^

 

thanks a million~!!

 

If you actually draw these

 

Her artist did.

 

yup its jadenkaiba

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thanks for the corrections...but im now getting the right ocg by copying the original yugioh card game...you are the best there is ~!!!!

 

I'm a little confused. Will you use my corrections or not? Also, I can see some of the cards you used to base your effects on. Some of them are outdated, so some of the 'fixes' are updates.

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Cerce and Thomas are only in the special manga? We're not recurring characters?

 

Sadly but yes...Becuase we started the series with Kaibaman a long time ago before I met both of you' date=' and Exa Raiun is one of the mainstay as Alexa Raine.

 

thanks for the corrections...but im now getting the right ocg by copying the original yugioh card game...you are the best there is ~!!!!

 

I'm a little confused. Will you use my corrections or not? Also' date=' I can see some of the cards you used to base your effects on. Some of them are outdated, so some of the 'fixes' are updates.

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I'll use some of that...But I would like to do it on my own too~~!!

UPDATED~~!! 4 CARDS ADDED~~!!

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