[Notorious] Overload Draco Burst Dragon [Notorious]

[Wuu.]

[align=center]Don't think it could be put to good use =/

 

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

This card type is also treated as Machine-Type. If your opponent controls a Normal monster you can destroy that monster, your opponent's Lifepoints is decreased by half the ATK of the destroyed Normal monster, skip your next Draw Phase.

Edited the effect whit a small drawback, still don't know if it's good =/[/align]

[Krokosaurus]

You should set a limit and increase the ATK and DEF instead.

Now: 7.5/10

With the corrections:9/10

[Wuu.]

You should set a limit and increase the ATK and DEF instead.

Now: 7.5/10

With the corrections:9/10

 

Put a limit on what?

[Guest Zeonark]

Overload Draco Burst Dragon? Er, I don't really like the name. Makes it sound all God-Like only the find the effect...bland.

 

This card type is also treated as Machine-Type. If your opponent controls a Normal monster you can destroy that monster' date=' inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half of the ATK of the destroyed monster.[/quote']

 

Meh. I'd seriously either add more or increase the stats. Not too impressing for a level 8 monster.

 

7/10.

[Wuu.]

Yeah, that's what i thought xD

 

Raise ATK and DEF to 2800?

[Silas Angel]

Maybe a Lv 5 or 6, lower the hype in the name, slightly change the effect, and use a different picture if that'll be it's effect. =/

 

See, a monster like that should be Level 8. But the effect/stats should back it up also. If you wanna keep it Lv8, take away the Normal Monster part of the effect. And maybe add a drawback like "This card cannot attack this turn." or something. Also, mind you that Stardust Dragon would have fun with this card xD Not only is SD's stats higher, but it's effect can negate this one. There'd be almost no reason to play this card. So you may want to beef it up just a little ;)

[Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh]

There is no such thing (I think) as a Lv8 monster with 2000 Atk and less than 2500 Def.

 

OCG: This card is also treated as Machine-Type monster. If your opponent controls a Normal monster, you can destroy that monster. Then inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half the ATK of the monster destroyed by this card's effect.

[Wuu.]

Then i'll higher the ATK to 2800?

 

Man my skills in card creating are destroyed xD

[Silas Angel]

xD No problem Notorious, you just gotta remember that there are only 15 slots available in an Extra Deck =P Make yours a shew in! Also, the Normal Monster thing is kinda slowing it down, no one really plays Vanillas =/ Although they should, they're fun =P

 

EDIT: Yes to the 2800 xD I forgot to reply

[Guest Zeonark]

2800 along with it's effect would be a bit...much. I'd change it to 2400-2600.

 

Your skills aren't destroyed, they're just lacking right now. Lol.

[Silas Angel]

2800 along with it's effect would be a bit...much. I'd change it to 2400-2600.

 

Your skills aren't destroyed' date=' they're just lacking right now. Lol.

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It's effect destroys the Normal Monsters that nobody plays... =/ How is that overdoing it?

[Guest Zeonark]

2800 along with it's effect would be a bit...much. I'd change it to 2400-2600.

 

Your skills aren't destroyed' date=' they're just lacking right now. Lol.

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It's effect destroys the Normal Monsters that nobody plays... =/ How is that overdoing it?

 

If he's going along with everyone's idea to change it to any monster and also the good deal of burn. That'd be somewhat overdoing it.

[Silas Angel]

2800 along with it's effect would be a bit...much. I'd change it to 2400-2600.

 

Your skills aren't destroyed' date=' they're just lacking right now. Lol.

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It's effect destroys the Normal Monsters that nobody plays... =/ How is that overdoing it?

 

If he's going along with everyone's idea to change it to any monster and also the good deal of burn. That'd be somewhat overdoing it.

 

Oh! ok, that I agree with =P I thought you were talking about it's current effect\

[Wuu.]

There is no such thing (I think) as a Lv8 monster with 2000 Atk and less than 2500 Def.

 

OCG: This card is also treated as Machine-Type monster. If your opponent controls a Normal monster' date=' you can destroy that monster. Then inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half the ATK of the monster destroyed by this card's effect.

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Winged Kuriboh LVL10

[.Leo]

OCG Fix.

 

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
This card type is also treated as Machine-Type. If your opponent controls a Normal monster you can destroy that monster and inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster.[/Code]

 

I would only side it. I would Main when facing a BEWD or Gemini Deck.

 

Aside from that it is pretty basic.

 

~8.6/10~

[ragnarok1945]

Leo already pointed out the OCG errors

 

the effect is a little too basic, give it another effect while it's on the field

 

8.2/10

[Sleepy]

I would say you need to reword it a little ^-^" you see,

even though Normal Monsters are almost not used at all anymore, overkilling a sertain type of card is not good. The way you have the effect there right now says that if your opponent has a Normal Monster, it is destroyed and it doesn't say anything like "once per turn", meaning you will obliterate Normal Monsters continuously as long as it is your turn. Even if not many players use them, its a pretty overpowered effect... Just fix that bit ;)

 

So far, its an overpowered card that not many people would be willing to use. I would say make the ATK or DEF higher, not because of those comments that say it should be just because its Level, but just to really balance it.. (+that other suggestion about the effect xD )

 

Just saying.

[Lord Smeagle]

Oh, come on now! Don't Vanillas have enough hate already? This guy just beats the few defiant Normal Monster users left into total submission.

 

Even if you fix it so it can only do it once per turn (cause Sleepy's right, that effect says continuous destruction at the moment) why pick on the Normals? It isn't as if they need it.

 

I suppose yes, you could use it against Geminis...but the builds I've played recently move so fast, you'll rarely see a Gemini on the field that doesn't have its effect.

[Metal Skull]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

This card type is also treated as Machine-Type. If your opponent controls a Normal monster you can destroy that monster and inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster.

Go with this correction.

But Normal mMonster.

LOL pretty much OP'ed if your opponent uses a Normal Monster deck...

Give more effects, that one is a bit bland

Creativity = 0

Pic is cool

7/10

[Brittle Ice]

This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. Once per turn, if your opponent controls a Normal Monster, you can destroy it and inflict Direct Damage to your opponent equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster.

 

I thought you should limit it to one monster per turn.

Very bad image, an OK name.

The card is OP'd. It allows you to destroy a monster and inflict Direct Damage to your opponent. You might want to add something like: "During the turn you used this effect, skip your Battle Phase". Just to balance things a bit.

 

7.5 / 10

[:^)]

3000

 

OP'd

[Sleepy]

3000

 

OP'd

 

umm... the monster is 2000 ATK and 2000 DEF, I don't see 3000 anywhere... =/

[:^)]

3000

 

OP'd

 

umm... the monster is 2000 ATK and 2000 DEF' date=' I don't see 3000 anywhere... =/

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Read my Signature.

[Wuu.]

Thanks, yall.

Edited the effect still don't know if it's good.

[Guest Zeonark]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

This card is also treated as Machine-Type. If your opponent controls a Normal monster you can destroy that monster' date=' inflict damage equal to half of the ATK of the destroyed monster.[/quote']

 

Good attack raise, but I barely see a difference in effect. And I just realized, Geminis could have a problem with this. Lol.

 

7/10