rezarhb Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Umm.. this is my new card i create [/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 I think you need to post a card as fast you can before you got reported :S cause its only card here :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Pros: Good PicI like the name (Minus the "EL")Pretty Good Effect Cons:Generic as hellI doubt you speak english cause the OCG is pretty horrid (although I see what you were intending)Bird isn't a real Type. 6.5/10 because I know you tried. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 You're as sure as hell lucky you're a new member. Otherwise, some would've destroyed you. Possibly including me. *Shot* This card cannot be Normal Summoned' date=' Set, or Flip Summoned. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 WIND monsters from play. Once per turn, by paying 800 Life Points, This card gains 300 ATK for each WIND monster in your graveyard during your battle phase, untill the end phase.[/quote'] Probably worded that wrong. Anyway, change Bird to Winged Beast. Not sure if it's balanced or not. I'd up it to level 5 or 6. I like it anyway. Nice name, nice picture. Fix the OCG and you'll be good. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 bird isn't a real type, change it to Winged Beast given its atk boosting ability, you should make this a lv5 monster instead 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Should be Winged Beast not Bird :/ OCG would be: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 WIND monsters in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can pay 800 Life Points to have this card gain 300 ATK for each WIND monster in your Graveyard until the end of the Battle Phase. This card's effect can be activated during either player's turn. Pretty funny, and pretty epic effect. I suggest for the cost, that you should make the +ATK effect permanent. He starts pretty low, needs Graveyard setup, costs you Life, and its limited to once per turn. 8/10 ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rezarhb Posted December 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Sorry this only a test so i still update new cardOK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninja165 Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Winged-Beast is the most common type for bird cards, Bird isn't a real type. You made a few typos in the description. Still, I like the concept of the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rezarhb Posted December 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 ok,im sorry if it bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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