Hungry Panda Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Hi! Hope you like my newest card. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 First sentence should be You can remove from play 1 DARK monster on your Graveyard to Special Summon this card from your hand. The effect isn't anything original, but it's relatively balanced out, quite good for someone new 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 first sentence:If you mean you can Normal Summon it but want to have an extra Summoning option, add the "you can" part as ragnarok says.If you mean he can only be Summoned that way but with the ability to use Monster Reborn on it in the future, it is:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned byIf you mean he cannot be Summoned or reborned in any way, ever, except that way.. it is:This card cannot be Normal Summone or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by About the card, its good so far, I like it ;)I would advice you to increase that ATK to 2400 so it can be a match for Monarch monsters. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungry Panda Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Small update added. Thanks Ragnarok and Sleepy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krokosaurus Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 It´s maybe a bit strong but quite balanced. Good card for a newbie.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Looks more like a Fiend. And it's "When this card is destroyed as a result of battle". Seems kinda...useless with it's effect. Unless it's destroying a Cylinder or a Mirror Force. THEN it's good. 7/10Not bad for a newbie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 "When this card is destroyed as a result of battle". It's by battle, actually.New OCG. Anyway, bad image, OK name.The effect isn't the most original one, but for your first card- well done. 7 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungry Panda Posted December 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Another update thanks zeonark and Kimimaro Kaguya for the correct ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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