Hungry Panda Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Sorry about the first post...I didn't really know how to post a card. XD Anyways, here it is in all it's glory. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◎Kaleidoscope Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Way OP, decrease the ATK by a lot!! But inventive for a 1st card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 It was better when you did not know how to post it. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 It was better when you did not know how to post it. 4/10 I lol'd. Even though you're new' date=' your OCG is somewhat bad. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the graveyard, Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position during your next Standby Phase. When this card is Special Summoned this way, it's level is halved. When this card's level is 1, remove this card from play. Only 2000 ATK, horrible DEF, and it can come back once. How is this overpowered exactly? Seems somewhat balanced. Name is unoriginal. Picture doesn't match a "Molten" theme. It's decent for a new member. Could be better.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krokosaurus Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 I think the DEF doesn´t matter at this card. But the pic really doesn´t match and I think it IS OPed (overpowered).3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard' date=' Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position during your next Standby Phase. When this card is Special Summoned this way, it's Level is halved. When this card's Level is 1, remove it from play.[/quote'] Fix'd. Anyway, it's a Level 4 Tuner that can become a Level 2 Tuner. That's kinda good.Bad picture, not so original name.You could lower it's ATK. Maybe to 1800? Also, increase it's DEF. 300 is too little. 7 / 10Good start.=) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 When I read the other post, I expected a fire-looking dragon with fire, lava, and stuff like that..=/OCG has been corrected by Kimimaro Kaguya. Card is overpowered mainly because it has too many good things going for it. 2000 ATK for a level 4 with no drawback exists already, but that doesn't mean that more should be made.. I would say you lower that ATK to any number between 1800 and 1000. Also, its a Tuner. Level 4 Tuner with 2000 ATK is already too much. The effect also has a role on its overpoweredness. Revives itself? O_o it wouldn't be that bad if its ATK was lower. I point out all mistakes and odd stuff I see but credit you for your first try ;) (mine was much worse lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 it's not OPed since it'll get removed from the game on the 2nd time 300 def is too low though, I'd raise it to 1000 or more Its atk can be dropped to the 1800 mark and then it'd be fine 7.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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