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The first effect has some useless words in it. If the card is destroyed, it is always sent to the Graveyard, so what's the point or adding that too?

 

Ehm, the last sentence might be changed to "Tails: Destroy this card. The owner of this card loses 900 Life Points(Battle Damage) is applied normally."

or

"Tails: Destroy this card and decrease its owner's Life Points by 900(Battle Damage is applied normally)"

Sentence is confusing as it is now.

9/10

 

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If there are no mistakes, why a 9/10 and not a 10/10?

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For it's second effect, no battle damage involving that card would be applied, since it would destroy itself in that damage step. "(Battle damage is applied normally)" is therefore incorrect.

 

Actually, just remove both of those battle damage parts altogether.

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OCG Fix:

 

When this card declares an attack, you can toss a coin. - Heads: Destroy the targeted monster with this card's effect without applying damage calculation. - Tails: Destroy this card and take 900 points of Effect Damage.

 

 

Seems rather too like "Arcana Force". Good image though.

 

7/10

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OCG Fix:

 

When this card declares an attack' date=' you can toss a coin. ● Heads: Destroy the attack target monster without applying damage calculation. ● Tails: Destroy this card and lose 900 Life Points.[/b']

 

 

Seems rather too like "Arcana Force". Good image though.

 

7/10

I fixed your fix.

 

My fix doesn't inflict damage, though. Not sure how to word the 2nd effect as damage. OCG was taken from Aegis of Gaia.

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OCG Fix:

 

When this card declares an attack' date=' you can toss a coin. ● Heads: Destroy the attack target monster without applying damage calculation. ● Tails: Destroy this card and inflict 900 points of damage to its owner.[/b']

 

 

Seems rather too like "Arcana Force". Good image though.

 

7/10

I fixed your fix.

 

My fix doesn't inflict damage, though. Not sure how to word the 2nd effect as damage. OCG was taken from Aegis of Gaia.

 

And I fixed your fix.

 

I love the picture, and the name is pretty cool. Very nicely done.

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OCG Fix:

 

When this card declares an attack' date=' you can toss a coin. ● Heads: Destroy the attack target monster without applying damage calculation. ● Tails: Destroy this card and inflict 900 points of damage to its owner.[/b']

 

 

Seems rather too like "Arcana Force". Good image though.

 

7/10

I fixed your fix.

 

My fix doesn't inflict damage, though. Not sure how to word the 2nd effect as damage. OCG was taken from Aegis of Gaia.

 

And I fixed your fix.

 

I love the picture, and the name is pretty cool. Very nicely done.

 

Thanks =)

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900 points of Effect Damage? is that new OCG?

*Searches OCG thread*

 

I didn't want to use 'Direct Damage', since it's not completely correct.

 

'Effect Damage' is sort-of new, and is sometimes used to describe damage taken by, understandibly, card effects. It differentiates it from generic 'Damage'.

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