Brendano Harns Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 [align=center]The pic is far from done, in fact I honestly haven't even started it yet, but the colored pencil version is on the card for now. For my new deck. Self-drawn. Please help me balance out and correct OCG. Enjoy. [spoiler=Holo.] [spoiler=Effect]This card is also treated as a Rock-Type monster. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the Synchro Summon of a Rock-Type Synchro monster, gain Life Points equal to the Synchro monster's Level x200. If you control a Rock-Type Tuner monster, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. When this card which was Special Summoned by this effect is sent to the Graveyard as a Synchro material monster, it is removed from play. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scyire Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 The effect is a little bland, and op'd and you have a pic that made me lol. 3/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sp1at Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Thats a good card but are there even any Rock-Type Synchros Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 The effect is a little bland' date=' and op'd and you have a pic that made me lol. 3/5[/quote'] Yeah, the pic isn't done yet. ^_^" What is OP'ed about it? Please explain. Thats a good card but are there even any Rock-Type Synchros *points to "For my new deck"* If I'm going to use it for my deck, don't you think I would make a Rock-Type Synchro? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 I wanna see it when the pic is done D: Nice effect, short and sweet. Though I think you should change 'When this card is sent to the Graveyard for the Synchro Summon of a Rock-Type monster" to If this card is used to Synchro Summon a Rock-Type monster... And you don't need this "," after Level. Pretty good I would say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 8/10 effect could use some touch ups Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 The effect is fine as is. With him making a Deck, I'm sure it will receive support and give support. Good card as always Fuzzie. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Needs a Background? h, good heal. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 I wanna see it when the pic is done D: Nice effect' date=' short and sweet. Though I think you should change 'When this card is sent to the Graveyard for the Synchro Summon of a Rock-Type monster" to If this card is used to Synchro Summon a Rock-Type monster... And you don't need this "," after Level. Pretty good I would say.[/quote'] Thanks. ^_^ I'm not sure if that's the right OCG; I have only seen it the way I said it. Needs a Background? h' date=' good heal. 9/10[/quote'] The pic is far from done' date=' in fact I honestly haven't even started it yet, but the colored pencil version is on the card for now.[/b'] For my new deck. Enjoy. *points to bolded part* Anyways, thanks everyone for the comments! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 quite simple of effect, it's balanced for it too this one looks really boring with no background though 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 Like I said, the pic isn't done yet. ;) What do you suggest I add to make it more complex? Anyways, thanks for the comment. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 I never said in this case simple was a BAD thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 Oh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Picturebump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 I see a guy burning in something that looks like crystals? O.oxD Anyways good effect 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 I see your point, you can barely see him. I'll edit the pic a bit. EDIT: Pic edited, as well as effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KindredTether Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 3/5:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sp1at Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 the pic is sick!!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Well, it has been coughing lately, so I dunno, I guess it could be... Thanks. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Grammar Nazi Style OCG Fix: ;D If you control a Rock-Type monster, this card is also treated as a Rock-Type monster. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the Synchro Summon of a Rock-Type Synchro monster, gain Life Points equal to the Synchro monster's Level [No Comma Here] x200. If you control a Rock-Type Tuner monster, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. You cannot activate this effect if it was sent to the Graveyard by its own effect. First Bolded:the way I wrote it is the way I usually see it nowadays. It covers "1 or more monster(s)" with just "a". Those situations are a little more uncommon to happen generally in a duel, so "if" suits it better than "when" in this case. Underlined:It just doesn't make sence. Being sent to the Graveyard as a Synchro Material is not part of any effect. And without it, your monster cannot be "sent to the Graveyard by its own effect".I guess you mean that after using it for a Synchro Summon, it won't come back again every time you have a Tuner for another easy extra material to abuse from (which is the reason, I think, that Crow said its overpowered).There are 2 similar cards in real life:-Pleaguespreader Zombie-Quilvolt Hedgehogwhich are removed from play after being used to avoid technical difficulties and confusions, like the ones that could happen with your card. Example: having 3 in grave and not knowing which one was sent properly. Although the way I think you mean in the underlined is: This effect cannot be activated if this card was sent from the field to the Graveyard as a Synchro Material Monster for the Sychro Summon of a Rock-Type Synchro Monster.or something like that. in any case. I like the card, and I about now, I got tired of acting the Grammar Nazi soo... Pic looks better. In an abstract way, those crystals looked like a city surroundging the monster in the previews version xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 Thanks sleepy. ^_^ ...and I mean to put if it was brought back from the Graveyard alreay once before. I think Worm Yagan has the wording I need. I'll edit it. EDIT: Fix'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Worm Yagan? :0Anyways, change looks good to me ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 It looks really gooid now, for Synchro Support. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Thanks! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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